for Have to Drive7/17/2012 c18 Random Guy
Straight to the point, I LOVED IT. Never was I this emotionally involved in any story. I was like crying and everything and THE LAST CHAPTER. You couldn't have made it more perfect. I was crying, swearing, and practically screaming. Never had I hated a villain so much. I'm sorry I'm being crazy right now. But I just love, love, LOVE, McGee/DiNozzo. And I love, love, LOVE Basically, I love this story, and I really do hope you continue making more! Hahahaha :) (Did I mention that I love your story?)
Straight to the point, I LOVED IT. Never was I this emotionally involved in any story. I was like crying and everything and THE LAST CHAPTER. You couldn't have made it more perfect. I was crying, swearing, and practically screaming. Never had I hated a villain so much. I'm sorry I'm being crazy right now. But I just love, love, LOVE, McGee/DiNozzo. And I love, love, LOVE Basically, I love this story, and I really do hope you continue making more! Hahahaha :) (Did I mention that I love your story?)
7/11/2012 c18 
11MissiYoung
Woah...this fic was intense. And there's that word again! lol Awesomeness, hon, thanks so much for sharing!
11MissiYoungWoah...this fic was intense. And there's that word again! lol Awesomeness, hon, thanks so much for sharing!
7/8/2012 c18 4TisAFarFarGreater
That was absolutely wonderful. So sweet and yet true to character. The way that abby was so protective and slightly crazy and then so fiercely supportive. And Gibbs was wonderful at the end. It was beautiful.
4TisAFarFarGreaterThat was absolutely wonderful. So sweet and yet true to character. The way that abby was so protective and slightly crazy and then so fiercely supportive. And Gibbs was wonderful at the end. It was beautiful.
6/26/2012 c18 briarprincess
I really loved this story and I really want to watch the Maltese Falcon with Tony now.
I really loved this story and I really want to watch the Maltese Falcon with Tony now.
3/3/2012 c18 20IncurablyAwesome
*keels over and dies*
I spent an entire Sunday reading this *nods proudly* I can't believe I got through the whole thing, but I did, and I am very pleased with myself ^_~ not only was your story an excellent way to procrastinate on my Physics assignment, but I do indeed consider it an excellent way to have spent a perfectly good Sunday c; You can see how much of a life I don't have \o/
There is absolutely nothing to complain about with regards to your spelling, punctuation and grammar, and the plot itsel was amazing; well thought out and beautifully developed. The long length meant you were able to deliver it spectacularly without holding back on otherwise minor details or rushing anything, resulting in a balanced well-structured and lets be honest, AWESOME piece of writing. You, my friend, are an excellent writer, and it has been my honour to read and review your work. Listen (okay, read :3) very carefully: DON'T EVER CHANGE.
Thank you so very very much for writing this; the length alone is a reflection of how much work you've put into it, not to mention how well-edited the story itself is.
Thanks again ;3 best wishes, and keep up the good work :D
~IA
20IncurablyAwesome*keels over and dies*
I spent an entire Sunday reading this *nods proudly* I can't believe I got through the whole thing, but I did, and I am very pleased with myself ^_~ not only was your story an excellent way to procrastinate on my Physics assignment, but I do indeed consider it an excellent way to have spent a perfectly good Sunday c; You can see how much of a life I don't have \o/
There is absolutely nothing to complain about with regards to your spelling, punctuation and grammar, and the plot itsel was amazing; well thought out and beautifully developed. The long length meant you were able to deliver it spectacularly without holding back on otherwise minor details or rushing anything, resulting in a balanced well-structured and lets be honest, AWESOME piece of writing. You, my friend, are an excellent writer, and it has been my honour to read and review your work. Listen (okay, read :3) very carefully: DON'T EVER CHANGE.
Thank you so very very much for writing this; the length alone is a reflection of how much work you've put into it, not to mention how well-edited the story itself is.
Thanks again ;3 best wishes, and keep up the good work :D
~IA
2/20/2012 c18 FrancineMarie
My gods, this hurt my heart in all kinds of ways, from literally ripping it out of my heart and replacing it with a cold hard slab of sadness to making it burst with joy as I squeed my fangirl heart out.
There is no higher praise.
I love Tim/Tony, especially when it's plausible, in character, and not rushed. Congrats. You hit the trifecta. This clearly means you're awesome.
-Francine
My gods, this hurt my heart in all kinds of ways, from literally ripping it out of my heart and replacing it with a cold hard slab of sadness to making it burst with joy as I squeed my fangirl heart out.
There is no higher praise.
I love Tim/Tony, especially when it's plausible, in character, and not rushed. Congrats. You hit the trifecta. This clearly means you're awesome.
-Francine
2/12/2012 c18 4Leyla Chaos
Oh. My. Fucking. Goodness.
This was defenitely the best McNozzo Fanfic I have ever read and will ever read.
I mean, it has anything I love in fanfics: one character (in McNozzo fanfics, preferable Tony) feeling guilty for something that happened to another haracter (Tim) (yeah, I just happen to love that), a lot of emotional inner monologues, the stereotypes of domninance and submission in the relationship being revised (I swear, I couldn't hold back a small squeal of delight when Tim went all Dom on Tony), action and a damned good style of writing (I really liked the part where Gibbs punishes Tony for what's happened to McGee and Tony's thoughts during that part). Oh, not to forget the whole story being well thought through, including an elaborate plan made up by some bad guy.
I swear, this tops The Ten Days Of Akatsuki Christmas, and I loved that story.
If I loved that, I totally adore this one.
Fuck. This is the best story ever. Seriously.
And I'm kinda at a loss for what the hell else to say.
Best fucking McNozzo slash, best fucking Tony-feeling-guilty-because-Tim-is-hurt and best fucking McNozzo fluff just seem to describe it well enough.
4Leyla ChaosOh. My. Fucking. Goodness.
This was defenitely the best McNozzo Fanfic I have ever read and will ever read.
I mean, it has anything I love in fanfics: one character (in McNozzo fanfics, preferable Tony) feeling guilty for something that happened to another haracter (Tim) (yeah, I just happen to love that), a lot of emotional inner monologues, the stereotypes of domninance and submission in the relationship being revised (I swear, I couldn't hold back a small squeal of delight when Tim went all Dom on Tony), action and a damned good style of writing (I really liked the part where Gibbs punishes Tony for what's happened to McGee and Tony's thoughts during that part). Oh, not to forget the whole story being well thought through, including an elaborate plan made up by some bad guy.
I swear, this tops The Ten Days Of Akatsuki Christmas, and I loved that story.
If I loved that, I totally adore this one.
Fuck. This is the best story ever. Seriously.
And I'm kinda at a loss for what the hell else to say.
Best fucking McNozzo slash, best fucking Tony-feeling-guilty-because-Tim-is-hurt and best fucking McNozzo fluff just seem to describe it well enough.
1/17/2012 c18 anon
On the whole, this was a well-written story, with my favorite parts being the Tony-Tim interactions. I did have a problem with everyone treating Tony like he's a complete asshole, though, especially Abby.
On the whole, this was a well-written story, with my favorite parts being the Tony-Tim interactions. I did have a problem with everyone treating Tony like he's a complete asshole, though, especially Abby.
1/10/2012 c1 Amber
Love love love this. Incredibly awesome.
Love love love this. Incredibly awesome.
1/4/2012 c18 Wow
That was incredible. The writing, the emotion, the characters, the story-it all rang true. Thank you for sharing this. It's amazing work.
I don't have any more "well rounded" things to say. Just, wow. And wow. And, wow.
I'm saving this entire story to my computer, copy-pasted into a document, and then I'm going to print out the whole thing in 10-pt font. Then I can read it again and again and even if you take it off of the site (which would be a downright sin) or my internet breaks or my computer never turns on again, I can be sure that I won't lose this story.
I hope you're still reading reviews. I don't want you to think for even half of a second that you "dragged it on too long" in the beginning or whatever crap you said. It's perfect.
And the sexy bits were amazing, too. This story is like a quart of really good cookie dough ice cream-it's not just the ice cream, it's freaking bits of cookie dough too, and there's even chocolate chips in the dough. It's not just a well-written, exciting, engaging story, it's also heart-poundingly hot, and the characters are actually true to the show. Heck, the story itself seems like a typical NCIS episode. Except, you know, a lot better. And a lot gayer. In other words, perfect.
That was incredible. The writing, the emotion, the characters, the story-it all rang true. Thank you for sharing this. It's amazing work.
I don't have any more "well rounded" things to say. Just, wow. And wow. And, wow.
I'm saving this entire story to my computer, copy-pasted into a document, and then I'm going to print out the whole thing in 10-pt font. Then I can read it again and again and even if you take it off of the site (which would be a downright sin) or my internet breaks or my computer never turns on again, I can be sure that I won't lose this story.
I hope you're still reading reviews. I don't want you to think for even half of a second that you "dragged it on too long" in the beginning or whatever crap you said. It's perfect.
And the sexy bits were amazing, too. This story is like a quart of really good cookie dough ice cream-it's not just the ice cream, it's freaking bits of cookie dough too, and there's even chocolate chips in the dough. It's not just a well-written, exciting, engaging story, it's also heart-poundingly hot, and the characters are actually true to the show. Heck, the story itself seems like a typical NCIS episode. Except, you know, a lot better. And a lot gayer. In other words, perfect.
12/11/2011 c7 4Lovelinelivelong639
So rather than work on my english paper I am slowly making my way though your story... Not my best idea but i am not complaining. becuase this is AWESOME! seriously I am psyched for more! I should just get reading! But i wanted to drop a message to you now saying this is great! im just hopeing i can finish tonight! THanks for writing! :D
4Lovelinelivelong639So rather than work on my english paper I am slowly making my way though your story... Not my best idea but i am not complaining. becuase this is AWESOME! seriously I am psyched for more! I should just get reading! But i wanted to drop a message to you now saying this is great! im just hopeing i can finish tonight! THanks for writing! :D
12/11/2011 c1 redtrolley
Tore through this, it was full of suspense and kept me at the edge of my seat. First I've read with this paring and the romance was written beautifully you've defintately kickstarted a new addcition! Thanks for posting
Tore through this, it was full of suspense and kept me at the edge of my seat. First I've read with this paring and the romance was written beautifully you've defintately kickstarted a new addcition! Thanks for posting
12/6/2011 c17 Bellsing
Well, this is my 2nd reading of this fic & it's still my favourite Mcnozo, and I've read a lot! Even with the serious subject matter you still managed to stay true to the show and have little blasts of humour and a healthy dollop of sweetness. Your Tony & Tim were both easily believable and I thought you were spot-on with Abby. Love it.
Well, this is my 2nd reading of this fic & it's still my favourite Mcnozo, and I've read a lot! Even with the serious subject matter you still managed to stay true to the show and have little blasts of humour and a healthy dollop of sweetness. Your Tony & Tim were both easily believable and I thought you were spot-on with Abby. Love it.
10/23/2011 c18 Dashine111
I really, really enjoyed this story! I think it was a wonderful blend of romance, drama and action. I will definitely be favorite-ing this story so I can read it again later!
I really, really enjoyed this story! I think it was a wonderful blend of romance, drama and action. I will definitely be favorite-ing this story so I can read it again later!