for Changes7/18/2011 c8 Starr123
Argh! Don't leave it on a brilliant cliffhanger! This is gripping :)
Argh! Don't leave it on a brilliant cliffhanger! This is gripping :)
1/27/2011 c8 
8bob-fred93
please keep going... you cant stop there...i mean talk about a bloody cliffhanger... please continue... pretty pretty pretty please :D
8bob-fred93please keep going... you cant stop there...i mean talk about a bloody cliffhanger... please continue... pretty pretty pretty please :D
6/17/2010 c8 Ellen Asher
Well gwd i am so into tis story n it so deserves a few more chapters babes...x!
Well gwd i am so into tis story n it so deserves a few more chapters babes...x!
1/9/2010 c8 Ellen Asher
Please carry this on its well gwd.
In wr cross overs u should do a my sisters keeper crossover with Racehal n either Chris or Eddie in it or do 1 like tat on you-tube.
Tat is how gwd I tink u r at things like tis.
So please...
Please carry this on its well gwd.
In wr cross overs u should do a my sisters keeper crossover with Racehal n either Chris or Eddie in it or do 1 like tat on you-tube.
Tat is how gwd I tink u r at things like tis.
So please...
1/6/2010 c8 Ellen Asher
Please carry tis on it is very gwd
Please carry tis on it is very gwd
12/29/2009 c1 number1fannie2009
hey its me,,
ur storey is great/amazing/wicked
i'll explain the name on a private message kk
speak soon from ashleighh
hey its me,,
ur storey is great/amazing/wicked
i'll explain the name on a private message kk
speak soon from ashleighh
12/20/2009 c8 85theoofoof
Love it
(but then you knew that already didn't you!)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
85theoofoofLove it
(but then you knew that already didn't you!)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
12/20/2009 c8 Ellen Asher
Please carry this on it is fantastic i really want to know what happens...x!
Please carry this on it is fantastic i really want to know what happens...x!
12/1/2009 c4 85theoofoof
Wow, Beccy - this is really good. An original idea. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Just a pointer - just keep an eye on your spelling/puctuation and grammar. I know it's hard - you read your own work so many times that you just end up reading what you want to be there. If you want a beta reader, I'd be happy to look at any future chapters for you? Let me know.
85theoofoofWow, Beccy - this is really good. An original idea. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Just a pointer - just keep an eye on your spelling/puctuation and grammar. I know it's hard - you read your own work so many times that you just end up reading what you want to be there. If you want a beta reader, I'd be happy to look at any future chapters for you? Let me know.
11/16/2009 c7 34Celticgirl84
Brilliant I loved it, but please let Rachel be OK.
Oh, and lots of Reddie
34Celticgirl84Brilliant I loved it, but please let Rachel be OK.
Oh, and lots of Reddie
10/28/2009 c6 34Celticgirl84
I hope Rachel lives, long live REDDIE, even if its only in our fics.
Great story
34Celticgirl84I hope Rachel lives, long live REDDIE, even if its only in our fics.
Great story