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139Meatball42
I love this chapter so much! I'm totally positve the team would completely change the course of their job to help out this girl, who as far as they know could be a bad guy. The only discrepancy is that in the first chapter Parker said 'I thought he didn;t have any children?' but besides thaqt this is starting to make a lot of sense! I love it! Can't wait to see where this job goes from here!
139Meatball42I love this chapter so much! I'm totally positve the team would completely change the course of their job to help out this girl, who as far as they know could be a bad guy. The only discrepancy is that in the first chapter Parker said 'I thought he didn;t have any children?' but besides thaqt this is starting to make a lot of sense! I love it! Can't wait to see where this job goes from here!
12/7/2009 c5 5Kitty Fowl
Woo! That's ring's one heck of a family heirloom! 8 million (and 23 cents)? Dang! I already love this story, and I can't wait to see where it goes! Keep up the good work.
5Kitty FowlWoo! That's ring's one heck of a family heirloom! 8 million (and 23 cents)? Dang! I already love this story, and I can't wait to see where it goes! Keep up the good work.
9/15/2009 c4 63BookWorm37
Other than the fact that I take offense on Eliot's behalf to the claim that he wouldn't be able to tell a real hitman from a fake one, excellent job and I'm eagerly awaiting more.
63BookWorm37Other than the fact that I take offense on Eliot's behalf to the claim that he wouldn't be able to tell a real hitman from a fake one, excellent job and I'm eagerly awaiting more.
9/12/2009 c4 139Meatball42
I think you may have uploaded the wrong chapter, because it's a bit difficult to see the connection between this chapter and the last.
139Meatball42I think you may have uploaded the wrong chapter, because it's a bit difficult to see the connection between this chapter and the last.
8/18/2009 c3 63BookWorm37
Hmm. Sounds interesting. I'm still a little confused, but I'll bear with you as this seems to be going somewhere.
63BookWorm37Hmm. Sounds interesting. I'm still a little confused, but I'll bear with you as this seems to be going somewhere.
8/17/2009 c3 139Meatball42
I love the reference to the woman from the Homecoming Job! She was awesome.
It seems a bit unrealistic that a ring would be worth 8 million dollars and 23 cents, bit that's a little thing.
I'm looking forward to seeing how the team plans to take down this gand, and how Ally fits in. I'm still stressed becaue I don't know who that was at her door!
139Meatball42I love the reference to the woman from the Homecoming Job! She was awesome.
It seems a bit unrealistic that a ring would be worth 8 million dollars and 23 cents, bit that's a little thing.
I'm looking forward to seeing how the team plans to take down this gand, and how Ally fits in. I'm still stressed becaue I don't know who that was at her door!
8/15/2009 c2 63BookWorm37
Hm. Interesting. Very interesting. I'd really like to see where you go with this. The Leverage team seems to have an amateur assistant on this one.
63BookWorm37Hm. Interesting. Very interesting. I'd really like to see where you go with this. The Leverage team seems to have an amateur assistant on this one.
8/14/2009 c2 139Meatball42
I love this! I love Allison! She's obviously smart, but definitely not comfortable breaking the law. She's determined to get to the bottom of this, but she's going to need some help! I can't wait to see what happens next! Great story so far!
139Meatball42I love this! I love Allison! She's obviously smart, but definitely not comfortable breaking the law. She's determined to get to the bottom of this, but she's going to need some help! I can't wait to see what happens next! Great story so far!