for Destine de l'amour5/22/2011 c8 ScarletPhantomess
AWSOME ! I luv this ! It combines 3 of my fave things The Mauraders , girl OCs , and midevil times :D Mauh ha ha ha ha ! The Dark Ages Marauder style ! We're learning about it in my Social Studies class . So , PLZ UPDATE (or die) !:D
AWSOME ! I luv this ! It combines 3 of my fave things The Mauraders , girl OCs , and midevil times :D Mauh ha ha ha ha ! The Dark Ages Marauder style ! We're learning about it in my Social Studies class . So , PLZ UPDATE (or die) !:D
3/12/2011 c8 Leonia
Update soon , please
I like this story , it's an interesting concept.
When will Lily and James meet? I suppose they'll go to the forest and they'll meet there? Is Peter gonna be a traitor in this story? And the main characters can't do magic or can they?
Update please
Leonia
Update soon , please
I like this story , it's an interesting concept.
When will Lily and James meet? I suppose they'll go to the forest and they'll meet there? Is Peter gonna be a traitor in this story? And the main characters can't do magic or can they?
Update please
Leonia
12/24/2010 c8 
2Leanora
fantastic job! I loved this chapter very much! You're a ery talented author!
So since I totally loved this chapter of your story, I’ve donated 200 grains of rice in honor of your story. I was able to do this by going to freerice dot com, and playing games. I am also a member of Fanfictioners Against World Hunger. If you are interested, you can contact me, or Loonynameless, the “go – to” person of the group.
Once again, great job, and I’m looking forward to your next chapter! Until then!
~Leanora
2Leanorafantastic job! I loved this chapter very much! You're a ery talented author!
So since I totally loved this chapter of your story, I’ve donated 200 grains of rice in honor of your story. I was able to do this by going to freerice dot com, and playing games. I am also a member of Fanfictioners Against World Hunger. If you are interested, you can contact me, or Loonynameless, the “go – to” person of the group.
Once again, great job, and I’m looking forward to your next chapter! Until then!
~Leanora
12/23/2010 c8 5JamesPotterROXmySOX
YAYYY new chapter(: which means Lily and James are coming up soon? right? right?(: haha sorry, im just super excited.
Update soon,
NIKI
5JamesPotterROXmySOXYAYYY new chapter(: which means Lily and James are coming up soon? right? right?(: haha sorry, im just super excited.
Update soon,
NIKI
12/23/2010 c8 12AnotherNamelessAuthor
I really like this and hope you can update soon. I want lily to meet James! X
12AnotherNamelessAuthorI really like this and hope you can update soon. I want lily to meet James! X
12/19/2010 c7 5JamesPotterROXmySOX
I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! i've never read a story like this with JamesxLIly and i just LOVE it! its so original:) i can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you get your computer fixed ASAP! (: (:
NIKIJANE
5JamesPotterROXmySOXI AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! i've never read a story like this with JamesxLIly and i just LOVE it! its so original:) i can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you get your computer fixed ASAP! (: (:
NIKIJANE
5/30/2010 c7 4lovefromyourginger
i hope it gets fixed soon. this is the best version of kingdoms and such i've read, plz post whenever ur convenienced.
4lovefromyourgingeri hope it gets fixed soon. this is the best version of kingdoms and such i've read, plz post whenever ur convenienced.
5/17/2010 c7 prongs4eva
Wow, thanks for creating this amazing story. I'm stunned by the amount of detail and effort you've put into creating this paralax world of Harry Potter/other fantasy books. I was on the edge of my seat with excitment. Good luck with the virus. I hope you havn't lost any drafts.
I'm impatiently waiting for the next chapter.
Keep writing.
-prongs4eva
Wow, thanks for creating this amazing story. I'm stunned by the amount of detail and effort you've put into creating this paralax world of Harry Potter/other fantasy books. I was on the edge of my seat with excitment. Good luck with the virus. I hope you havn't lost any drafts.
I'm impatiently waiting for the next chapter.
Keep writing.
-prongs4eva