for Before the Final Moment8/19/2014 c1 
2ClearMortality
I'm pretty sure I spent around 25 or so minutes taking my time to read this. I will admit, those 25 minutes were not wasted at all. In fact, I think I'll go revisit this page on day and take another 25 minutes to reread this wonderfully written one-shot. If a simple one-shot of yours can leave turn me into a mess of fangirling, squealing and all out gaping, well I'm simply even more excited now about reading your others stories
2ClearMortalityI'm pretty sure I spent around 25 or so minutes taking my time to read this. I will admit, those 25 minutes were not wasted at all. In fact, I think I'll go revisit this page on day and take another 25 minutes to reread this wonderfully written one-shot. If a simple one-shot of yours can leave turn me into a mess of fangirling, squealing and all out gaping, well I'm simply even more excited now about reading your others stories
2/1/2014 c1 Tsumugi
-melts in pile of fangirl mush- That was the best thing I have ever read. My OTP, with lots of emotion and lovey-dovey and foreplay and then the hot sex scenes! You have won my loyalty! I love this!
-melts in pile of fangirl mush- That was the best thing I have ever read. My OTP, with lots of emotion and lovey-dovey and foreplay and then the hot sex scenes! You have won my loyalty! I love this!
12/7/2013 c1 2ili777
For a minute there I was so confused when Kurogane woke up from his dream, but I caught up quickly. I really liked this one-shot it quite different from the other 'the night at clow', good different. I liked how Fai teased Kurogane about... well about everything and they were such sweet moments in the story too. I really liked it, great job writing it :)
2ili777For a minute there I was so confused when Kurogane woke up from his dream, but I caught up quickly. I really liked this one-shot it quite different from the other 'the night at clow', good different. I liked how Fai teased Kurogane about... well about everything and they were such sweet moments in the story too. I really liked it, great job writing it :)
3/24/2010 c1 32Uakari
I generally try to be articulate, but this story left me gaping "holy balls" through a slacked jaw. SO WORTH the hour it took me to read! Amazing writing and amazing sex! Please excuse the twitching and drool, I need a cold shower now...
32UakariI generally try to be articulate, but this story left me gaping "holy balls" through a slacked jaw. SO WORTH the hour it took me to read! Amazing writing and amazing sex! Please excuse the twitching and drool, I need a cold shower now...
9/15/2009 c1 cherrycrissycris
Wow you have talent for making a scene last without letting the heat of the story go cold. I picked up a few spelling mistakes though which includes that it is Fai (or Yui) not Fay, but overall I was impressed. I've added both the story and you (the author) to my favorites.
Wow you have talent for making a scene last without letting the heat of the story go cold. I picked up a few spelling mistakes though which includes that it is Fai (or Yui) not Fay, but overall I was impressed. I've added both the story and you (the author) to my favorites.
9/13/2009 c1 1k+Val-Creative
Bwa! So sweet! ^/^ And so loving! Loving sex! I dunno why Fai and Kurogane be so cute but they are...they really are... this was wonderful. Good job.
~ Val
1k+Val-CreativeBwa! So sweet! ^/^ And so loving! Loving sex! I dunno why Fai and Kurogane be so cute but they are...they really are... this was wonderful. Good job.
~ Val
8/30/2009 c1 8Never Believe the Believable
You know, I was quite dissappointed with the readers when I saw that you ONLY have FOUR reviews!
This story was AMAZING. It was professionaly and, above all, believable. I loved it and I'm extremely glad I read it. I particularly like how you wrote the sex scenes in which they weren't JUST sex scenes; little actions showed that it meant a lot to them.
Awesome work ^-^
8Never Believe the BelievableYou know, I was quite dissappointed with the readers when I saw that you ONLY have FOUR reviews!
This story was AMAZING. It was professionaly and, above all, believable. I loved it and I'm extremely glad I read it. I particularly like how you wrote the sex scenes in which they weren't JUST sex scenes; little actions showed that it meant a lot to them.
Awesome work ^-^
8/25/2009 c1 6Aynessa
You know...I really loved this story, until they woke up and Kuro realized it was a dream. This was so unbelievably sweet, yet still maintaining the awkwardness of a first time, and then you just confused everything by saying it was a dream and they've been together for months. Gah!
Oh well, I'm happy I got to read something so worthwhile. Beautiful writing style, I love the way you keep the banter up between Fai and Kurogane even while they're awkwardly attempting their "first time". Love it!
6AynessaYou know...I really loved this story, until they woke up and Kuro realized it was a dream. This was so unbelievably sweet, yet still maintaining the awkwardness of a first time, and then you just confused everything by saying it was a dream and they've been together for months. Gah!
Oh well, I'm happy I got to read something so worthwhile. Beautiful writing style, I love the way you keep the banter up between Fai and Kurogane even while they're awkwardly attempting their "first time". Love it!
8/24/2009 c1 16anon azure
that was so awesome
I LOVE IT!
It was so sweet and lemony
Please excuse me now...
I'm having a nosebleed...
16anon azurethat was so awesome
I LOVE IT!
It was so sweet and lemony
Please excuse me now...
I'm having a nosebleed...
8/14/2009 c1 39Tsubasa-fan
*cleans up nosebleed* I don't think you were lazy- *distracted by kurofai o3o*
lol 3
39Tsubasa-fan*cleans up nosebleed* I don't think you were lazy- *distracted by kurofai o3o*
lol 3