for Why Not Try?9/5/2009 c1 
44FreeBelovedArmy
Great Story! I liked it. I used to be against incest too but now I absolutely love twincest. But really just twincest, not incest with other family memebers. :D
44FreeBelovedArmyGreat Story! I liked it. I used to be against incest too but now I absolutely love twincest. But really just twincest, not incest with other family memebers. :D
8/22/2009 c1 lemony goodness
its not just incest. its hitaciincest!
its not just incest. its hitaciincest!
8/17/2009 c1 MamaSnow
Please... do... MORE! That was awesome. The best fanfic I've ever read. It was written with taste cos you didn't just keep on trying to disguise the word dick or cock by using the word organ/member excessively. And it got straight to it. Lol
Loved it XD
Please... do... MORE! That was awesome. The best fanfic I've ever read. It was written with taste cos you didn't just keep on trying to disguise the word dick or cock by using the word organ/member excessively. And it got straight to it. Lol
Loved it XD
8/16/2009 c1 resuki
o/o t...t...twincest hott twincest! like me and sissy! I LOVE IT -^_^- yay!
o/o t...t...twincest hott twincest! like me and sissy! I LOVE IT -^_^- yay!
8/15/2009 c1 SuikaChan555
wow that was a nice story *has a nosebleed*
and i like the idea of the plot :D
wow that was a nice story *has a nosebleed*
and i like the idea of the plot :D
8/14/2009 c1 sunshine
and why not? I wonder if you will continue this (even though it's fine if you dont, there are enough angst fics already) and it was pretty good. It would have been better with some more detail i guess and interaction. It seemed a bit short, but it was still good.
and why not? I wonder if you will continue this (even though it's fine if you dont, there are enough angst fics already) and it was pretty good. It would have been better with some more detail i guess and interaction. It seemed a bit short, but it was still good.
8/14/2009 c1 10liquidity
I liked it. I know exactly what you mean about not wanting write incest fics until you got into Ouran. These two are just too good together not to write. Kaoru is such a cute uke, too.
I thought you kept them pretty in-character, which is great. Kaoru didn't seem overly helpless like he does in some stories, and Hikaru didn't seem way too overbearing.
I spotted a few errors, but other than that, this was an enjoyable little piece of smut that had a bit of story, too. That's the way I like it, personally.
10liquidityI liked it. I know exactly what you mean about not wanting write incest fics until you got into Ouran. These two are just too good together not to write. Kaoru is such a cute uke, too.
I thought you kept them pretty in-character, which is great. Kaoru didn't seem overly helpless like he does in some stories, and Hikaru didn't seem way too overbearing.
I spotted a few errors, but other than that, this was an enjoyable little piece of smut that had a bit of story, too. That's the way I like it, personally.
8/14/2009 c1 demon's lil angel
i liked it. i liked how it wasn't all smut, but you put what they were thinking and feeling as well. another good thing is that there wasn't to many talking parts, just enough. i like the idea too, and i think you did a good job of keeping them in character.
i liked it. i liked how it wasn't all smut, but you put what they were thinking and feeling as well. another good thing is that there wasn't to many talking parts, just enough. i like the idea too, and i think you did a good job of keeping them in character.