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11/30/2011 c1 cuddyannie
Very good hope you write more of this story.
10/23/2011 c1 4philosophyluver
coolio. I sincerely hope this story.
2/20/2011 c1 21baerritosandtears
lol this was cute! You should write more!
12/12/2010 c1 1Cornamenta Potter
LOL cute :3
6/30/2010 c1 3Lily4Evr
this is great hurry and write more
5/27/2010 c1 2toffiechick281
U should make this a full story i would so read it it's also a good story in full Cya
5/11/2010 c1 falteringvoices
Can't you continue? Please?
5/1/2010 c1 Trishia
Lovin the story
please update soon :)
4/5/2010 c1 18The Queen of Pixies
lol i love it
3/31/2010 c1 5WishingOnMyStar
Okay, it wasn't bad, I just didn't really see any kind of plot or anything. And even one-shots and short stories need plots.

Also, the thing about Annabeth's eyes. Grey's pretty common. In fact, I have grey eyes and so do a couple other people I know. So that part didn't really make sense.

Like I said, your writing wasn't BAD, it just didn't seem to have a point. It might've been a good set up for a longer story, but you said this one is complete so I assume you don't have any intentions of furthering it.

-Wish
3/7/2010 c1 3Melkorka Fae
pleez update soon! this is one of the best stories I've read.
1/4/2010 c1 12WarwomanWay
Please,please update.

I want to know more.
1/4/2010 c1 Aria Dragoncrest
Excellent
12/21/2009 c1 5ChordOverstreetFan
That would make more sense than just suddenly being able to see the future.
10/13/2009 c1 14Omgoth
Awesome... please update soon.
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