Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for My Happy Ending

8/16/2009 c1 stillstanding13
It was okay a little standard you serriously need more dialogue and stuff.Plus you need to lure people to actually want to read it! And BTW why is this story on topic on Annie the musical?

Sorry if I was crittical but i'm saying the truth.

Desktop Mode . Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service