for Vita Obscura4/6/2019 c2 Dugleik
I know it's abandoned years ago, but I'm still going to follow the story, because this sounds really interesting.
I know it's abandoned years ago, but I'm still going to follow the story, because this sounds really interesting.
11/29/2012 c2 
17TaekwondoAssKicking
On the first day of freakin' Christmas YOU SHALL give to fans; Chapter 3 gift wrapped and for all of us to read! Update. Seriously. Now. I want to read! Pwease? :D
17TaekwondoAssKickingOn the first day of freakin' Christmas YOU SHALL give to fans; Chapter 3 gift wrapped and for all of us to read! Update. Seriously. Now. I want to read! Pwease? :D
7/17/2012 c2 YoWazzupGirl
Waiting for chapter 3 for years. Love story. Move yo ass! /giggles/
Waiting for chapter 3 for years. Love story. Move yo ass! /giggles/
6/28/2012 c2 Guest
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3/18/2012 c2 NumbOneFan
Pleeeeeaaaaaase UPDATE!
I loveit I love it I love it I love it!
You are awesome, amazing, super cool, best story ever!
UPDATE!
Pleeeeeaaaaaase UPDATE!
I loveit I love it I love it I love it!
You are awesome, amazing, super cool, best story ever!
UPDATE!
6/2/2011 c1 2silentpenguin
If you take more than 30 days to update this time, I'll make nyan cat go after you. Love the story so far! I always love it when Percy has this awesome secret life. He's cool. :D
2silentpenguinIf you take more than 30 days to update this time, I'll make nyan cat go after you. Love the story so far! I always love it when Percy has this awesome secret life. He's cool. :D
5/25/2011 c2 2mae.raine
sometimes when someone is trying not to slander a character, they end up slandering another character in order to get the balance. try to keep everyone IC, it makes it more belieavable as arthur especially almost never loses his temper. his relationship with Percy in OoTP was always strained silence, they were both mad at each other, each by a supposed betrayal. y'know what i mean.
still awesome though.
just... longer chapters please? in the next time you update, anyway xD oh and beta readers you can always scout around. (that way you can look at their beta profiles and get an entire list of betas to choose from) the hp fanfics have loads of beta readers. :)
HECKLE HECKLE ANNOY ANNOY NAG NAG TWEET TWEET POKE POKE
2mae.rainesometimes when someone is trying not to slander a character, they end up slandering another character in order to get the balance. try to keep everyone IC, it makes it more belieavable as arthur especially almost never loses his temper. his relationship with Percy in OoTP was always strained silence, they were both mad at each other, each by a supposed betrayal. y'know what i mean.
still awesome though.
just... longer chapters please? in the next time you update, anyway xD oh and beta readers you can always scout around. (that way you can look at their beta profiles and get an entire list of betas to choose from) the hp fanfics have loads of beta readers. :)
HECKLE HECKLE ANNOY ANNOY NAG NAG TWEET TWEET POKE POKE
9/19/2009 c1 29shampoo147
Ooh, i Love this! Percy is one of my favorite characters and I hate it when he's slandered.
Please bring more.
29shampoo147Ooh, i Love this! Percy is one of my favorite characters and I hate it when he's slandered.
Please bring more.
9/13/2009 c1 TT
A nice twist on an older idea!
I'd like to see where this goes. Right now its too broad to catch my intrigue, but there's definitely potential there too.
A nice twist on an older idea!
I'd like to see where this goes. Right now its too broad to catch my intrigue, but there's definitely potential there too.
8/26/2009 c1 Lia
Please do continue! Percy's one of my favorites and, in my opinion, doesn't get nearly the respect he deserves. He is basically a genius, right? Anyway, I particularly like him with Kingsley :) Hope to see new chapters up soon!
Please do continue! Percy's one of my favorites and, in my opinion, doesn't get nearly the respect he deserves. He is basically a genius, right? Anyway, I particularly like him with Kingsley :) Hope to see new chapters up soon!
8/24/2009 c1 66Jente Bidernais
I kinda feel blackmailed into reviewing! That's mean... But it DID make me review, so it helped achieve your goal, I guess... :D
I like this, and I'm curious... I want you to write chap. 2.
66Jente BidernaisI kinda feel blackmailed into reviewing! That's mean... But it DID make me review, so it helped achieve your goal, I guess... :D
I like this, and I'm curious... I want you to write chap. 2.
8/22/2009 c1 DaiHinMin
Hi, great story, I like how percy has the power and someone realized it.
-thanks for a great story :)
Hi, great story, I like how percy has the power and someone realized it.
-thanks for a great story :)
8/16/2009 c1 Jen
What next, what next!
Ops, Looks like Percy's caught. Hopefully, Kingsley is a nice guy.
What next, what next!
Ops, Looks like Percy's caught. Hopefully, Kingsley is a nice guy.