for The Raikage6/14 c19 katlegop156
could you please yupdate this fanfiction because it has the most op version of naruto and would be interesting to what more great ideas you could come up with if you continue writing it alongside rise of the raikage
could you please yupdate this fanfiction because it has the most op version of naruto and would be interesting to what more great ideas you could come up with if you continue writing it alongside rise of the raikage
4/28 c19 Pucusi81
I really enjoyed reading this story so much that I have read it several times now. I must say that you kind sir need to continue writing the next chapter already. It has been 11 years now and you are dropping the ball here. Thank you for your time on this story.
I really enjoyed reading this story so much that I have read it several times now. I must say that you kind sir need to continue writing the next chapter already. It has been 11 years now and you are dropping the ball here. Thank you for your time on this story.
42/8 c2 Guest
Tsuande Tsuande Tsuande XD
Tsuande Tsuande Tsuande XD
10/20/2024 c1 Zeke Hooper
Sunadia should have left with him.
Sunadia should have left with him.
10/8/2024 c4 Its.Mitch.O
Even though this story is old for an opposing nation Kumo gave the Konoha shinobi way too much information.
Even though this story is old for an opposing nation Kumo gave the Konoha shinobi way too much information.
10/8/2024 c18 axlmolemans
Een super leuk verhaal ben benieuwd hoe het afloopt .
Dit is mijn nummer één verhaal dat ik tot nu heb gelezen
Een super leuk verhaal ben benieuwd hoe het afloopt .
Dit is mijn nummer één verhaal dat ik tot nu heb gelezen
9/28/2024 c19 Guest
I love this story. Particularly the Political Intrigue which I think is an element MISSING from a lot of these, ‘Banished Naruto’, stories. I mean BANISHMENT is a POLITICAL ISSUE so it SHOULD involve Political Intrigue BEYOND ‘Naruto is Banished, Goes Elsewhere, Becomes a Bad-Ass’, but I think there were many missed opportunities.
FIRST and foremost, although we DIDN’T find out until ‘Kakashi Gaiden’, which MAY not have been released when this was published, there was PLENTY of evidence throughout ALL OF NARUTO that Orochimaru WAS once part of Root. So WHY NOONE looks at Danzo and goes ‘THIS is your fault’, is something that blows my mind. I mean IGNORING that Danzo MADE Orochimaru INTO the monster he is. You had the Han’nya Clan, which we KNOW he wiped out WITHOUT Sarutobi’s approcal. We ALSO KNOW that NONE of the Kage trust him, SO the ENTIRE WAR, could and should have been placed ON HIS HEAD in this story.
At LEAST Naruto should have said “F*** you, you pissed these dudes off, DO something about it ALMIGHTY Danzo-sama” in a mocking tone.
Secondly, Kishimoto’s ‘Politics’ in the ‘Ninja World’ is TOO FLIMSY, which is one of the reasons the series became UNBEARABLE to watch, and PROBABLY done because of Kishimoto’s ‘Wishy-Washy’ plot bunnies, like deciding to jump back to Pre-2010 FanArt and make Tobi into Obito even though it makes NO SENSE.
You in turn seem to prefer using Old European politics, which is cool, because old European politics make a HELLUVA lot more sense than old ASIAN Politics. SERIOUSLY Sengoku – Meiji Era politics and 3 Kingdoms politics make NO SENSE whatsoever. I mean you had Feudal Lords MARRYING clan princesses, then beheading her, and NO ONE is like “You backstabbing sunuvabeech”?
Add in your MIX of Japanese AND Chinese characters, I would have gone with him ruling a FOREIGN continent and Conquering the Elemental Nations.
USUALLY I’m into ‘Emperor Naruto’ fics, BUT they lack the politics, and are FOCUSED on “Revenge Against Konoha”, which seems CHILDISH to me, because I think the WHOLE ‘Naruto World’ is F’ed up.
Me PERSONALLY, I’m working on a story where Naruto rules a separate continent, combining MULTIPLE Isekai and Fantasy locations, like ‘That Time I Got Reincarnate as a Slime’ and others into a Europe, Eurasia kind of land and depicts the Elemental/Feudal Nations like some backwater Japan.
I love this story. Particularly the Political Intrigue which I think is an element MISSING from a lot of these, ‘Banished Naruto’, stories. I mean BANISHMENT is a POLITICAL ISSUE so it SHOULD involve Political Intrigue BEYOND ‘Naruto is Banished, Goes Elsewhere, Becomes a Bad-Ass’, but I think there were many missed opportunities.
FIRST and foremost, although we DIDN’T find out until ‘Kakashi Gaiden’, which MAY not have been released when this was published, there was PLENTY of evidence throughout ALL OF NARUTO that Orochimaru WAS once part of Root. So WHY NOONE looks at Danzo and goes ‘THIS is your fault’, is something that blows my mind. I mean IGNORING that Danzo MADE Orochimaru INTO the monster he is. You had the Han’nya Clan, which we KNOW he wiped out WITHOUT Sarutobi’s approcal. We ALSO KNOW that NONE of the Kage trust him, SO the ENTIRE WAR, could and should have been placed ON HIS HEAD in this story.
At LEAST Naruto should have said “F*** you, you pissed these dudes off, DO something about it ALMIGHTY Danzo-sama” in a mocking tone.
Secondly, Kishimoto’s ‘Politics’ in the ‘Ninja World’ is TOO FLIMSY, which is one of the reasons the series became UNBEARABLE to watch, and PROBABLY done because of Kishimoto’s ‘Wishy-Washy’ plot bunnies, like deciding to jump back to Pre-2010 FanArt and make Tobi into Obito even though it makes NO SENSE.
You in turn seem to prefer using Old European politics, which is cool, because old European politics make a HELLUVA lot more sense than old ASIAN Politics. SERIOUSLY Sengoku – Meiji Era politics and 3 Kingdoms politics make NO SENSE whatsoever. I mean you had Feudal Lords MARRYING clan princesses, then beheading her, and NO ONE is like “You backstabbing sunuvabeech”?
Add in your MIX of Japanese AND Chinese characters, I would have gone with him ruling a FOREIGN continent and Conquering the Elemental Nations.
USUALLY I’m into ‘Emperor Naruto’ fics, BUT they lack the politics, and are FOCUSED on “Revenge Against Konoha”, which seems CHILDISH to me, because I think the WHOLE ‘Naruto World’ is F’ed up.
Me PERSONALLY, I’m working on a story where Naruto rules a separate continent, combining MULTIPLE Isekai and Fantasy locations, like ‘That Time I Got Reincarnate as a Slime’ and others into a Europe, Eurasia kind of land and depicts the Elemental/Feudal Nations like some backwater Japan.
9/21/2024 c6 Robert Krause
why not let Naruto took over as rebels cap and his team had took out the high rank officers and others rich men and women over time his had be the 5 Raikage and his had some adopted a fox girl Narkuo and her brother Saro and ben now, when over time his made it good too, with time the lord had get kill off and his wife Jata took over and had her son be out now, and as for others into her place had took out of office now, and fire too, when Discovered others too, Naruto had be doing the same too, when his old ship the fox fire is sill going now, and killer bee and others is sill going on now,
why not let Naruto took over as rebels cap and his team had took out the high rank officers and others rich men and women over time his had be the 5 Raikage and his had some adopted a fox girl Narkuo and her brother Saro and ben now, when over time his made it good too, with time the lord had get kill off and his wife Jata took over and had her son be out now, and as for others into her place had took out of office now, and fire too, when Discovered others too, Naruto had be doing the same too, when his old ship the fox fire is sill going now, and killer bee and others is sill going on now,
8/29/2024 c3 Guest
Way too much context in all the wrong places. I don't want to read a wall of text detailed the exploits of ever side character Immediately. Its just an info dump. Its hard to read, Its not very interesting, and doesn't even give the right info. its just way to hard to follow the plot when you jump right into a 10 year time skip with random alliances, people and events that come out of nowhere, It might be easier to follow if it at least followed narutos pov
Way too much context in all the wrong places. I don't want to read a wall of text detailed the exploits of ever side character Immediately. Its just an info dump. Its hard to read, Its not very interesting, and doesn't even give the right info. its just way to hard to follow the plot when you jump right into a 10 year time skip with random alliances, people and events that come out of nowhere, It might be easier to follow if it at least followed narutos pov
7/28/2024 c2 behaissonia
Moi jdis balec qu'elle est soi disant changé la Sakura si vous voulez vous en débarrasser faîte le mais laissez les autres partir
Moi jdis balec qu'elle est soi disant changé la Sakura si vous voulez vous en débarrasser faîte le mais laissez les autres partir