for The Raikage4/14/2019 c19 Guest
Where’s the next one
Where’s the next one
3/26/2019 c14 
3Stephane az
j’espère que naruto va continuer a détruire konoah petit a petit tout en tuant des personne comme sasuke danzo sakura en tout cas super fiction continue
3Stephane azj’espère que naruto va continuer a détruire konoah petit a petit tout en tuant des personne comme sasuke danzo sakura en tout cas super fiction continue
3/15/2019 c3 Brandon Boodoo
Wow you did not just bring bleach characters into your fanfic without saying so in your description. See ya and have fun with (i my opinion) stupid fanfic.
Wow you did not just bring bleach characters into your fanfic without saying so in your description. See ya and have fun with (i my opinion) stupid fanfic.
3/11/2019 c2 Guest
I love this story. Please update on it soon
I love this story. Please update on it soon
3/8/2019 c4 ficsion
one of the stories with great potential and best plots but improperly written... there are multiple instances of character description of same person and ninja villages are meant to be hidden and so does their skills and techniques but u were clearly flaunting it every single chance u got.
one of the stories with great potential and best plots but improperly written... there are multiple instances of character description of same person and ninja villages are meant to be hidden and so does their skills and techniques but u were clearly flaunting it every single chance u got.
3/6/2019 c4 Guest
Can you continue writing, please? Your story is great!
Can you continue writing, please? Your story is great!
3/5/2019 c3 AdriLAAAxo
Please just get on with the story already! You have made several parapgraphs about EVERY single OC so far and its getting ridiculous. Get a beta please.
Please just get on with the story already! You have made several parapgraphs about EVERY single OC so far and its getting ridiculous. Get a beta please.
3/4/2019 c19 8CCSakuraforever
Esta muy bueno la historia mas como le va a naruto como raikage mas su historia como llego mas sus planes mas que pasa en konoha mas que trama danzo y los akasutki mas sus nuevas alianzas mas las esposas mas que va a pasar mas adelante
8CCSakuraforeverEsta muy bueno la historia mas como le va a naruto como raikage mas su historia como llego mas sus planes mas que pasa en konoha mas que trama danzo y los akasutki mas sus nuevas alianzas mas las esposas mas que va a pasar mas adelante
2/20/2019 c10 Esmereilda
my guess is theyre own side one that will likely favor suna since I cant see Naruto forsaking gaara
my guess is theyre own side one that will likely favor suna since I cant see Naruto forsaking gaara
2/14/2019 c19 Guest
Awaiting the next chapter eagerly
Awaiting the next chapter eagerly
2/9/2019 c19 Irina Akashira
Hi
I found this fanfic and quite like it
Anyway, Do you ever have any aim to continue it?
It is your fanfic and your decision if continue or not, I know. But if you choose not continue ot, you should put abandoned or indefinetly hiatus or similar
Hi
I found this fanfic and quite like it
Anyway, Do you ever have any aim to continue it?
It is your fanfic and your decision if continue or not, I know. But if you choose not continue ot, you should put abandoned or indefinetly hiatus or similar