
1/11/2010 c1
4Steveothepirate
Very nicely done. The gritty tone is perfectly pulled-off, and the vivid descriptions of violence contradicting the Four Acres' "background music" leaves me with a Pulp Fiction or A Clockwork Orange flavor.
Wonderful start. Hope you continue the tale. =)

Very nicely done. The gritty tone is perfectly pulled-off, and the vivid descriptions of violence contradicting the Four Acres' "background music" leaves me with a Pulp Fiction or A Clockwork Orange flavor.
Wonderful start. Hope you continue the tale. =)
8/22/2009 c1
7thestrange-ladymalz
Very nice start. Nice amount of detail, and the pace is good. Cant wait for the next chapters. Keep going!
~Morgan

Very nice start. Nice amount of detail, and the pace is good. Cant wait for the next chapters. Keep going!
~Morgan
8/21/2009 c1
6TNTCrash
Short scene, well written and leaning towards a very dark atmosphere that could make you wonder if there's something else going on in the background. It definitely holds emotion. Can't wait for it to continue.
-Crash
PS Thanks for the review I haven't been on the site recently.

Short scene, well written and leaning towards a very dark atmosphere that could make you wonder if there's something else going on in the background. It definitely holds emotion. Can't wait for it to continue.
-Crash
PS Thanks for the review I haven't been on the site recently.