6/6/2010 c7 11rimera
Very, very cool. I can't wait to read some with Gohan as part of the team. I'm excited to see how the chemistry goes once the novelty wears off. I also look forward to finding out more about Shu's past...
Very, very cool. I can't wait to read some with Gohan as part of the team. I'm excited to see how the chemistry goes once the novelty wears off. I also look forward to finding out more about Shu's past...
11/18/2009 c6 8Lady Venamisa
Man, this just gets better and better, doesn't it? ;) You are still the king of all things epic.
Sorry I haven't been around a lot. Remember the friend I told you about? Well, I've been staying over with her for the past few days. Well, I am back and ready for business! :) Keep on writing this stuff, revy! You have a real tallent for it!
~Lady Venamisa~
Man, this just gets better and better, doesn't it? ;) You are still the king of all things epic.
Sorry I haven't been around a lot. Remember the friend I told you about? Well, I've been staying over with her for the past few days. Well, I am back and ready for business! :) Keep on writing this stuff, revy! You have a real tallent for it!
~Lady Venamisa~
11/11/2009 c5 Sid89
Revu, you have quite the interesting stories. Your best so far is definitely immortal sayian, but this one is wuite entertaining as well. You are a great author with a lot of imagination.
Revu, you have quite the interesting stories. Your best so far is definitely immortal sayian, but this one is wuite entertaining as well. You are a great author with a lot of imagination.
10/21/2009 c4 Lady Venamisa
Oh, damn! o.O
First of all, some excellent lines in this chapter! Pendyne kicks ass! :3
I hope this story gets more reviews and hits soon...this is just brilliant! You really explain things intelligently, even if the chapters are short. This miniseries needs more love ;D
p.s.: elipsies xD
Oh, damn! o.O
First of all, some excellent lines in this chapter! Pendyne kicks ass! :3
I hope this story gets more reviews and hits soon...this is just brilliant! You really explain things intelligently, even if the chapters are short. This miniseries needs more love ;D
p.s.: elipsies xD
10/21/2009 c3 Lady Venamisa
I was just going over your story again, and I just realized that I never reviewed this chapter! This is pretty bad-ass, right here!
Ha! Stupid, foolish, human-like creatures! That's what you get for messing around with things you don't understand!
He he he, You really know how to make a story interesting, eh? :3 well, off to read the next chapter!
P.S. YOU ROCK MY SOX
I was just going over your story again, and I just realized that I never reviewed this chapter! This is pretty bad-ass, right here!
Ha! Stupid, foolish, human-like creatures! That's what you get for messing around with things you don't understand!
He he he, You really know how to make a story interesting, eh? :3 well, off to read the next chapter!
P.S. YOU ROCK MY SOX
9/2/2009 c3 22Prats 'R' Us
That was a good chapter,I'm sort of wondering where captain Jack Harkness and his team are through out this. Where do you get your names from I love them!
That was a good chapter,I'm sort of wondering where captain Jack Harkness and his team are through out this. Where do you get your names from I love them!
8/27/2009 c2 8Lady Venamisa
You know revu, it takes a good author to write great characters, but it takes a GREAT one to write great original characters in a fanfiction for any anime! Keep up the good work, and I will be here, reading as always :3
~Lady Venamisa~
You know revu, it takes a good author to write great characters, but it takes a GREAT one to write great original characters in a fanfiction for any anime! Keep up the good work, and I will be here, reading as always :3
~Lady Venamisa~
8/26/2009 c2 22Prats 'R' Us
this is getting interesting, though I'm not sure what it has to do with dragonball z but I still like it. Ah Pendyne there's always one isn't there lol.
this is getting interesting, though I'm not sure what it has to do with dragonball z but I still like it. Ah Pendyne there's always one isn't there lol.
8/22/2009 c1 Cuauhtemoc
Revu, you did catch my eye on this story. even if i haven't seen your other stories. i am now hooked. oh and your twist on the book of “Time and Relative Dimension in Space”. Ha! good one in adding it in there like that. (now where did i park that box)
Cuauhtemoc
Revu, you did catch my eye on this story. even if i haven't seen your other stories. i am now hooked. oh and your twist on the book of “Time and Relative Dimension in Space”. Ha! good one in adding it in there like that. (now where did i park that box)
Cuauhtemoc
8/21/2009 c1 Prats 'R' Us
so this takes place while Gohan and the others are fighting buu right? It sounds intresting are the dbz characters going to apear at some point?
so this takes place while Gohan and the others are fighting buu right? It sounds intresting are the dbz characters going to apear at some point?
8/19/2009 c1 7Supreme Tempest
Well I don't think the proffesor's going to be happy about that! Please update soon.
Well I don't think the proffesor's going to be happy about that! Please update soon.