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8/30/2009 c2 me
ah i like it, but i feel you need to work on other things, besides the whole explanation thingy. like, the relationship. oh and i think you should make the chapters longer, m'k? other than that, it's good. please write more and updated soon, i would be delighted if you did so. ja ne
8/30/2009 c2 Shinichi1412
I like where this is going. X3 keep up the excellent work!
8/19/2009 c1 me
uh huh, interesting i think? i'd like to find out where this goes, cause i'm at a loss, so please update soon! ;)
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