for Dawn of Darkness, book 1: The Fourth Apprentice
485/1/2010 c13 WyldClaw
SO they found the creature that was responsible for bramblecaw's death-a beaver!
will they encounter more beavers?
Is Hollystar furious with leafpool and that's why she told her that she's got a half moon to prove that she can train as a warrior?
SO they found the creature that was responsible for bramblecaw's death-a beaver!
will they encounter more beavers?
Is Hollystar furious with leafpool and that's why she told her that she's got a half moon to prove that she can train as a warrior?
4/3/2010 c30 Brambleclaw101
Wow! This is by far the most exciting fanfic I've read! I love your ideas and the plot! However, your grammar and the way you announce your new ideas could improve. Instead of announcing the allegiances, you could have a chapter dedicated to the new characters.
Wow! This is by far the most exciting fanfic I've read! I love your ideas and the plot! However, your grammar and the way you announce your new ideas could improve. Instead of announcing the allegiances, you could have a chapter dedicated to the new characters.
12/5/2009 c12 WyldClaw
I think that being made deputy really surprised brackenfur! and his grandkits came that very night.
I like Bumblestripe, Briarpatch and Blossomsun's names. I bet graystripe and millie are very proud of their kits
I think that being made deputy really surprised brackenfur! and his grandkits came that very night.
I like Bumblestripe, Briarpatch and Blossomsun's names. I bet graystripe and millie are very proud of their kits
12/5/2009 c10 WyldClaw
What? How did Hollyleaf survive? so she is destined to be leader?
that can't be good news
What? How did Hollyleaf survive? so she is destined to be leader?
that can't be good news
12/5/2009 c8 WyldClaw
Is that dovepaw's power... to see into the future?
who will be thunderclan's leader now?
Is that dovepaw's power... to see into the future?
who will be thunderclan's leader now?
12/5/2009 c5 WyldClaw
That was nice that firestar gave the clan his parting words even though he has not joined satrclan yet
That was nice that firestar gave the clan his parting words even though he has not joined satrclan yet
12/5/2009 c4 WyldClaw
What? he can't be on his last life... can he?
I love toadstrike and rosestorm's name-much better than their names in the book: Toadstep and rosepetal
What? he can't be on his last life... can he?
I love toadstrike and rosestorm's name-much better than their names in the book: Toadstep and rosepetal
11/26/2009 c26 GinnyStar
Hard to type with a black cat on my lap, a elder, named Reggiee, who miss us while we were gone so he spending some time with us, well written good interaction, good background on cats, places and such.
Hard to type with a black cat on my lap, a elder, named Reggiee, who miss us while we were gone so he spending some time with us, well written good interaction, good background on cats, places and such.
11/23/2009 c25 Sandstorm345
Omg I love your story it's so intense with the right amount of humor and drama. All I can say is keep up the good work!
Omg I love your story it's so intense with the right amount of humor and drama. All I can say is keep up the good work!
11/14/2009 c25 H
Dun dun dun... What will happen to Windclan? This is Mintshadow22 because I'm too lazy to type in my username in the box or log in. Update soon!
Dun dun dun... What will happen to Windclan? This is Mintshadow22 because I'm too lazy to type in my username in the box or log in. Update soon!