for Dawn of Darkness, book 1: The Fourth Apprentice11/14/2009 c25 Audrey
I love this, what sickness is in WindClan? Keep writing! Im hanging out on the limb here, waiting!
I love this, what sickness is in WindClan? Keep writing! Im hanging out on the limb here, waiting!
11/13/2009 c4 GinnyStar
Well written, good interaction, and well written, as for name haven got a clue.
Well written, good interaction, and well written, as for name haven got a clue.
11/13/2009 c25 
10Cinderpaw11
You didnt get 5 reviews? I cant remember if I did or not. Im sorry if I didn't. Do WindClan have swine flu( or H1N1, if you will )? I had it. Its not fun. UPDATE SOON, I BEG OF YOU!
10Cinderpaw11You didnt get 5 reviews? I cant remember if I did or not. Im sorry if I didn't. Do WindClan have swine flu( or H1N1, if you will )? I had it. Its not fun. UPDATE SOON, I BEG OF YOU!
10/25/2009 c24 Ripplemist777
I like stream and pebble. they seem like nice cats. i wonder weather they will become members of the clan.
I like stream and pebble. they seem like nice cats. i wonder weather they will become members of the clan.
10/24/2009 c24 Rockpool of SkyClan
Awesome chapter! I don't remember a fourth kit belong born, though. When Wolfpaw got there, two kits had been born, and he helped deliver the third. What happened to the fourth? Jayfeather said "you have three sons and a daughter." Still a awesome chapter! I also think that Stream and Pebble are tribe cats, because I remember a to-be named Pebble that Rolls Down Mountain. Please update soon!
Awesome chapter! I don't remember a fourth kit belong born, though. When Wolfpaw got there, two kits had been born, and he helped deliver the third. What happened to the fourth? Jayfeather said "you have three sons and a daughter." Still a awesome chapter! I also think that Stream and Pebble are tribe cats, because I remember a to-be named Pebble that Rolls Down Mountain. Please update soon!
10/24/2009 c24 Beckie of Mywarriorcats.com
Snad,
Great story so far! Keep it up! I just wish Brackenfur hadn't been killed. D;
But, its how the story is I guess.
-Beckie of
Snad,
Great story so far! Keep it up! I just wish Brackenfur hadn't been killed. D;
But, its how the story is I guess.
-Beckie of
10/10/2009 c21 Ripplemist777
I thought Lizardkit was the one interested in being a medacine cat
I thought Lizardkit was the one interested in being a medacine cat
10/9/2009 c22 Rockpool of SkyClan
Just a warning. Heavystep of RiverClan died in Sunset, due to greencough. Leafpool failed to get Mudfur's message about catmint to Mothwing, and Heavystep died. (I just finnished re-reading Sunset)
Just a warning. Heavystep of RiverClan died in Sunset, due to greencough. Leafpool failed to get Mudfur's message about catmint to Mothwing, and Heavystep died. (I just finnished re-reading Sunset)
10/9/2009 c21 Rockpool of SkyClan
I think I know who the prophecy centers! Claw of a lion is Lionblaze, fang of a wolf is Wolfpaw, but what happened to Jayfeather's part is the "three" prophecy? And it seems ovious that these cats will stop the "region of bloody lives" danger. I still love the suspence this chapter offers, and the fact that Ivystone has a paw in two sky teritories, StarClan and The Dark Forest! So supensful!
I think I know who the prophecy centers! Claw of a lion is Lionblaze, fang of a wolf is Wolfpaw, but what happened to Jayfeather's part is the "three" prophecy? And it seems ovious that these cats will stop the "region of bloody lives" danger. I still love the suspence this chapter offers, and the fact that Ivystone has a paw in two sky teritories, StarClan and The Dark Forest! So supensful!
10/9/2009 c22 5Snad
So, as you can see, I am replying to my own story. hehe. I am because the next chapter won't be posted right away and I wanted to talk to the readers. I have added a new allegiances, lucky you, with all the updates I made while I was posted.
I also added Foxleap and Icecloud. Thanks for reminding me! It's a simple mistake I make when I make cats warriors/apprentices. I delete them (or cut them) to put them in the rank higher but forget too paste them.
So thanks again and sorry for the mistake! Thanks to the two replyers
-Snad
5SnadSo, as you can see, I am replying to my own story. hehe. I am because the next chapter won't be posted right away and I wanted to talk to the readers. I have added a new allegiances, lucky you, with all the updates I made while I was posted.
I also added Foxleap and Icecloud. Thanks for reminding me! It's a simple mistake I make when I make cats warriors/apprentices. I delete them (or cut them) to put them in the rank higher but forget too paste them.
So thanks again and sorry for the mistake! Thanks to the two replyers
-Snad
10/9/2009 c7 Mars
what happened to Foxpaw and Icepaw?
what happened to Foxpaw and Icepaw?
10/9/2009 c21 Rainwing4000
I like your story a lot! Please make another. They're really good!
I like your story a lot! Please make another. They're really good!