for Dawn of Darkness, book 1: The Fourth Apprentice10/4/2009 c20 Rockpool of SkyClan
Finally! Mousefur is dead! Not to be mean or anything, but Mousefur needed to go. One question. What happened to RiverClan and ShadowClan? Are they okay? Please get the next chapter out soon!
Finally! Mousefur is dead! Not to be mean or anything, but Mousefur needed to go. One question. What happened to RiverClan and ShadowClan? Are they okay? Please get the next chapter out soon!
10/4/2009 c20 Brakenheart
Nice
Nice
10/4/2009 c15 Brakenheart
Nice! I love Ravenpaw thanks for bringing him back
Nice! I love Ravenpaw thanks for bringing him back
10/4/2009 c5 Brandon
Nice chapter
Nice chapter
10/4/2009 c4 Brandon
Finally Firestar dies I love it!
Finally Firestar dies I love it!
10/3/2009 c20 
3Mistfeather
Hey! This is great! I love what you've done, only whats been happening to Squirrelflight? I havent seen her mentioned, and even though shes not a key character shes one of my favorites, so i was just wondering what happened, how she was affected by firestars death, and right after that brambleclaws, etc.
3MistfeatherHey! This is great! I love what you've done, only whats been happening to Squirrelflight? I havent seen her mentioned, and even though shes not a key character shes one of my favorites, so i was just wondering what happened, how she was affected by firestars death, and right after that brambleclaws, etc.
10/3/2009 c19 AudreyheartsWarriors
Good job writing. Keep up the good work. Im sitting in agony here, so hurry and write the new chappie! K?
Your #1 fan
Good job writing. Keep up the good work. Im sitting in agony here, so hurry and write the new chappie! K?
Your #1 fan
9/28/2009 c16 Snowstar of ThunderClan
This is an amazing chapter! Rockpool of SkyClan sent it to me, and she was right on how amazingly fantastical this is.
This is an amazing chapter! Rockpool of SkyClan sent it to me, and she was right on how amazingly fantastical this is.
9/28/2009 c19 Rockpool of SkyClan
On Hollystar's description, it says " golden tabby tom with a flame colored pelt" instead of "black she-cat with green eyes" I love your stories! Please put out the next chapters soon!
On Hollystar's description, it says " golden tabby tom with a flame colored pelt" instead of "black she-cat with green eyes" I love your stories! Please put out the next chapters soon!
9/28/2009 c18 16DaniPotterStarSeeker
the barn cat wasn't named Smudge. That was Firestar's buddy before he went into the forest. The barn cat's name was Barley.
16DaniPotterStarSeekerthe barn cat wasn't named Smudge. That was Firestar's buddy before he went into the forest. The barn cat's name was Barley.
9/28/2009 c19 ripplemist777
Hollystar isn't a ginger tom with a flame colored pelt She is iscribe as a black she-cat with green eyes
Hollystar isn't a ginger tom with a flame colored pelt She is iscribe as a black she-cat with green eyes
9/28/2009 c19 Ripplemist777
What happened to Lizardkit? She is not in the allegiances under Cinderheart's kits. It only lists Snakekit, Amberkit, Wolfkit and Dewkit.
What happened to Lizardkit? She is not in the allegiances under Cinderheart's kits. It only lists Snakekit, Amberkit, Wolfkit and Dewkit.
9/26/2009 c19 Rockpool of SkyClan
Wow! I wonder what would happen if RiverClan and WindClan joined forces and took on ThunderClan? These are really big clans! Keep on writing! :) ;)
Wow! I wonder what would happen if RiverClan and WindClan joined forces and took on ThunderClan? These are really big clans! Keep on writing! :) ;)
9/26/2009 c17 Rockpool of SkyClan
Why did Lionblaze become deputy? I like him and all...but wouldn't a better choice be Hazeltail? After all, it wouldn't make Hollystar look like she was picking favorite.
Why did Lionblaze become deputy? I like him and all...but wouldn't a better choice be Hazeltail? After all, it wouldn't make Hollystar look like she was picking favorite.