for Dawn of Darkness, book 1: The Fourth Apprentice9/26/2009 c16 Rockpool of SkyClan
Oh my gosh! Harespring is a murderer! Why did Brackenfur have to die! Please keep writing! This story keeps me in sync for the release of the fourth apprentence!
Oh my gosh! Harespring is a murderer! Why did Brackenfur have to die! Please keep writing! This story keeps me in sync for the release of the fourth apprentence!
9/25/2009 c16 ALLESON
It's so cool !
PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS!
FOXFLIGHT
It's so cool !
PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS!
FOXFLIGHT
9/25/2009 c16 alekz
why is onestar back wasnt he suposed to be dead already?
why is onestar back wasnt he suposed to be dead already?
9/23/2009 c16 
2TheMorriganWritesAgain
Please oh please oh please up date! Also be wary of run ons. I noticed a lot. I still like the story though!
2TheMorriganWritesAgainPlease oh please oh please up date! Also be wary of run ons. I noticed a lot. I still like the story though!
9/22/2009 c16 21heyshalina
your mean! why a cliffie? WHY? Anyways very good keep it up why do the old cats keep dying? its not fair! oh well, keep writing!
21heyshalinayour mean! why a cliffie? WHY? Anyways very good keep it up why do the old cats keep dying? its not fair! oh well, keep writing!
9/22/2009 c16 2runningfirexyz
write, write, write! Did I mention write?...Please write, I love this story!=]
2runningfirexyzwrite, write, write! Did I mention write?...Please write, I love this story!=]
9/22/2009 c16 AudreyheartsWarriors
Hey, the chapter was AWESOME as usual. Keep up the great work!
3 Sincerely, ur number 1 fan, Audrey.
Hey, the chapter was AWESOME as usual. Keep up the great work!
3 Sincerely, ur number 1 fan, Audrey.
9/21/2009 c16 Brightspirit
Cool story
Cool story
9/20/2009 c15 Rockpool of SkyClan
I think Lionblaze and Redpaw are in the tunnels. I cannot wait until the next chapter comes out! If they continue like this, you could create you're own story! I'd surely buy a copy!
I think Lionblaze and Redpaw are in the tunnels. I cannot wait until the next chapter comes out! If they continue like this, you could create you're own story! I'd surely buy a copy!
9/18/2009 c15 blank
Awsome! continue, or i shall get maad...
Awsome! continue, or i shall get maad...
9/18/2009 c15 10Cinderpaw11
Well I dun-no bout you other people but I wanna know whats goin on wit Ravenpaw and Lionblaze and Redpaw! Did you have the same idea that Ravenpaw was comin back sometime in his triology? Anyway UPDAT!
~ Cinderpaw11 ~
10Cinderpaw11Well I dun-no bout you other people but I wanna know whats goin on wit Ravenpaw and Lionblaze and Redpaw! Did you have the same idea that Ravenpaw was comin back sometime in his triology? Anyway UPDAT!
~ Cinderpaw11 ~