for Dawn of Darkness, book 1: The Fourth Apprentice9/18/2009 c15 AudreyheartsWarriors
EEP! Hurry up and write ur next chapter crazy spy-for-erin hunter-person-who-"claims"-shes-not! And dont threaten to lengthen ur chappies;theyre already long enough coming! Grr, just hurry up and tell me whats happened to Lionblaze and Redpaw already, and also why Ravenpaw is back in the Clans and without Barley! -gasp-
EEP! Hurry up and write ur next chapter crazy spy-for-erin hunter-person-who-"claims"-shes-not! And dont threaten to lengthen ur chappies;theyre already long enough coming! Grr, just hurry up and tell me whats happened to Lionblaze and Redpaw already, and also why Ravenpaw is back in the Clans and without Barley! -gasp-
9/16/2009 c14 
10Cinderpaw11
NO! CLIFFIE! But besides that good chapter. update ASAP!
Also I think that Hollystar should get a mate( cof Mousewhisker cof ) and have more kits
Silverkit/paw/foot - Silver she-cat with one white paw and amber eyes
Moonkit/paw/stripe - Almost black she-cat with green eyes
Ravenkit/paw/wing - Black and white tabby tom with amber eyes
:D but thats cause I always thought they would get together, just a suggestion( But Ide be happy if you did it :D )
~ Cinderpaw11 ~
10Cinderpaw11NO! CLIFFIE! But besides that good chapter. update ASAP!
Also I think that Hollystar should get a mate( cof Mousewhisker cof ) and have more kits
Silverkit/paw/foot - Silver she-cat with one white paw and amber eyes
Moonkit/paw/stripe - Almost black she-cat with green eyes
Ravenkit/paw/wing - Black and white tabby tom with amber eyes
:D but thats cause I always thought they would get together, just a suggestion( But Ide be happy if you did it :D )
~ Cinderpaw11 ~
9/16/2009 c14 AudreyheartsWarriors
HEY!
I loved that u put up thus chappie, but I was wondering if u can put up an updated allegiances on there, after this next chapter, not to sound so demanding. But seriously, are you like some sort of Erin Hunter spy, watching them write their newest book, and ur the one posting it for them? Because this looks prety legit. :D
Write back soon,
Audrey
HEY!
I loved that u put up thus chappie, but I was wondering if u can put up an updated allegiances on there, after this next chapter, not to sound so demanding. But seriously, are you like some sort of Erin Hunter spy, watching them write their newest book, and ur the one posting it for them? Because this looks prety legit. :D
Write back soon,
Audrey
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9/8/2009 c2 4Scarlet Embers
What I find weird is that I write a story which is my version of Omen of the Stars. In the prologue, Hollyleaf meets Sol and becomes dependent on him. Then seven days later, something similar happens in your story. :P
4Scarlet EmbersWhat I find weird is that I write a story which is my version of Omen of the Stars. In the prologue, Hollyleaf meets Sol and becomes dependent on him. Then seven days later, something similar happens in your story. :P
8/24/2009 c4 SkaterGirl246
Love it! Was the tabby figure in Dovepaw's dream Brambleclaw? I hope not! He's awesome! I can't wait for more! Please update soon, with or without 5 reviews! :)
Love it! Was the tabby figure in Dovepaw's dream Brambleclaw? I hope not! He's awesome! I can't wait for more! Please update soon, with or without 5 reviews! :)