for Straight Jacket Feeling9/9/2009 c1 ReidMorgan
Completely heart wrenching. This is my fave kind of Dan/Rorschach fic, I adored it.
Completely heart wrenching. This is my fave kind of Dan/Rorschach fic, I adored it.
9/1/2009 c1 Ynnep
TT/TT This one almost made me cry. Its sad and realistic...good job.
TT/TT This one almost made me cry. Its sad and realistic...good job.
8/22/2009 c1 
319Dreaming-Of-A-Nightmare
...this is the most amazing songfic i have EVER read, and the most amazing Dan-post-Ror-death fic i've ever read. MAJOR kudos to you, my dear~! :D
319Dreaming-Of-A-Nightmare...this is the most amazing songfic i have EVER read, and the most amazing Dan-post-Ror-death fic i've ever read. MAJOR kudos to you, my dear~! :D
8/21/2009 c1 2sereneflower
This was beautiful! I almost got angry when you put it in romance, cause I was like, "She said it wasn't SLASH!" But after reading your explanation, I understood what you were going for. And you did it brilliantly. I think I'm going to go cry now...sniff.
2sereneflowerThis was beautiful! I almost got angry when you put it in romance, cause I was like, "She said it wasn't SLASH!" But after reading your explanation, I understood what you were going for. And you did it brilliantly. I think I'm going to go cry now...sniff.
8/21/2009 c1 1Temhaya Devochka
I LOVED it so much! This was amazing and i loved the beans part I crack up just thinking about it. you did a great job.
1Temhaya DevochkaI LOVED it so much! This was amazing and i loved the beans part I crack up just thinking about it. you did a great job.
8/20/2009 c1 3sepulchreangel
Good use of song, first of all :D ALSO, very sad, moving story, I loved the narrative. My favorite lines were "To this day I truly believe that of you were not... Rorschach...you would have kissed me, in that last one hundred seconds of your life. But if that wasn't who you were, I wouldn't have wanted you to kiss me so badly"
GAH. This was good, very well written and very touching. :)
3sepulchreangelGood use of song, first of all :D ALSO, very sad, moving story, I loved the narrative. My favorite lines were "To this day I truly believe that of you were not... Rorschach...you would have kissed me, in that last one hundred seconds of your life. But if that wasn't who you were, I wouldn't have wanted you to kiss me so badly"
GAH. This was good, very well written and very touching. :)
8/20/2009 c1 undrappreciatedsib
I always like it when authors try to go deeper into a story than a straight up change of events. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy the latter sometimes. But I always have a deep appreciation for people like you who delve into what is and pull something like this out. Great job. It was a good length and I liked the added part about the 100 seconds. Like I wrote, delve into it and pull out something unique.
I always like it when authors try to go deeper into a story than a straight up change of events. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy the latter sometimes. But I always have a deep appreciation for people like you who delve into what is and pull something like this out. Great job. It was a good length and I liked the added part about the 100 seconds. Like I wrote, delve into it and pull out something unique.