for Freedom's Rise5/19 c16 redhotlady7552
Please, please, please update! This story is very good. I would like to see the finished product.
Please, please, please update! This story is very good. I would like to see the finished product.
8/22/2021 c11 emeraldmoon14
Decided to read your story again, and still love it as much as I did before. While reading this chapter I wondered if maybe Alexander would be meant for Alice. Don't typically like when stories lead to her and Edward being the bad guys so a change of pace is always nice. Also gotta love jealous Jasper, simply adore him and Bella together and this time frame!
Decided to read your story again, and still love it as much as I did before. While reading this chapter I wondered if maybe Alexander would be meant for Alice. Don't typically like when stories lead to her and Edward being the bad guys so a change of pace is always nice. Also gotta love jealous Jasper, simply adore him and Bella together and this time frame!
5/11/2021 c11 southernpur-rica
Found your story, love Peter, Jasper is sexy as always, and the fact that Bella is badass is just too cool
Found your story, love Peter, Jasper is sexy as always, and the fact that Bella is badass is just too cool
12/22/2020 c15 GoodVibezzz
how tf it submitted my review and I wasn't even done yet. smh anyway as I was sayingg, bae, honey, sweety, slut this is a 10/10 fanficc tell me this ain't abandoned rfn <33
how tf it submitted my review and I wasn't even done yet. smh anyway as I was sayingg, bae, honey, sweety, slut this is a 10/10 fanficc tell me this ain't abandoned rfn <33
12/22/2020 c16 GoodVibezzz
bruH it just occurred to me that the thingy says u haven't updated since 2015, brUhhh its 2020. bae, honey, sweety, slut
bruH it just occurred to me that the thingy says u haven't updated since 2015, brUhhh its 2020. bae, honey, sweety, slut
12/21/2020 c7 GoodVibezzz
I'm glad they didn't fcuk id probably down play bellas and jaspers relationship in the long run if they had.
I'm glad they didn't fcuk id probably down play bellas and jaspers relationship in the long run if they had.
11/3/2020 c7 Guest
I bet the affection is love. This chapter was so much better on my heart. I kind of wanted hate sex with him and Maria but the burn to her was worth it.
I bet the affection is love. This chapter was so much better on my heart. I kind of wanted hate sex with him and Maria but the burn to her was worth it.
11/3/2020 c6 Guest
Wow I've never read from someone that took this approach. These last two chapters had my eyes crying and burning.
Wow I've never read from someone that took this approach. These last two chapters had my eyes crying and burning.
11/3/2020 c5 Guest
RIP and my condolences to Johnny and Bellas entire crew. Fuck this was so sad to read.
RIP and my condolences to Johnny and Bellas entire crew. Fuck this was so sad to read.
11/3/2020 c4 Guest
Wow this story is amazing. Star eyes.
Wow this story is amazing. Star eyes.