8/1/2011 c15 2gingerninja713
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8/1/2011 c15 midtwilight
Have really been looking forward to an update on this story, and you didn't disappoint! I like the alpha warlord Jasper!

8/1/2011 c15 Mzdbar83
Love the story! This chapter was long overdue! Keep it up!

8/1/2011 c1 Simaril
Holy crap this is so good.

I was rec’d this fic by Gredelina1 and I owe her huge hugs for it as it is amazing. The level of detail in the initial scenes is amazing; it must have taken a lot of research.

I love the fact that although it is such a different setting to Twilight there are still some canon aspects of this Bella for us to enjoy. The fact she likes wearing comfortable clothes and her excelling at her studies make it easier to imagine canon Bella is this situation. She is the new and improved 1927 version.

Maria’s character is wonderfully evil. With just a few lines you create this clear image of her cruel nature that I love.

Looking forward to reading more.

Simaril x

8/1/2011 c15 9Fleur24
""The only thing that is stupid 'round here is you, Mistress." His emphasis and sarcastic jibe at her self-styled title left no room for doubt on his feelings of her and the situation. Maria looked shocked a split second before she slapped our Major so hard his head turned.

A growl so sinister, so threatening it had the newborns falling to their knees in fear and submission sounded out into the night. I watched as my brother turned his head, ever so slowly, back to face Maria; the look on his face had me dropping to my knees with the rest of them.

There was nothing left of my Major, my brother. He was the animal inside, the violent, vengeful, bloodthirsty animal; and all of us knew it.."" Maria's in trouble! YAY!

Alpha Warlord. I like god of War better, it also sounds cooler, but that's just me.

""If it is your wish, than by all means, Mistress, lead us. I will have no part in leading my troops into a suicide mission." He stepped back, a frighteningly calm expression on his face. Maria stared at him in shock. The subtle wording about the troops being his was lost on her reeling mind.

She had relied on Jasper to lead any and all missions. She had become accustomed to barking the occasional order at 'her' army from a relatively safe distance while watching the actual massacring take place; that was when she bothered to show up at all.""

The Major side of Jasper is awesome!

He knows that Maria needs him.

""I rose to stand, pretending for all the world that I wasn't worried that my brother was five steps away from viewing me as a threat and killing my pretty ass.

I felt like whistlin' a jaunty tune and stickin' my hands in my pockets to play nonchalant. So I did.

A giggle was muffled quickly, followed by a deep throated chuckle. Izzy and my brother took my asinine, possibly suicidal actions as a tension release and I thanked fuck that I was still wearing my head where I liked it, above my wonderfully broad shoulders."" HAHA Peter's awesome,

Yep putting Maria in her place was pretty cool!

8/1/2011 c15 LordXeenTheGreat
Awesome Chapter!

7/31/2011 c15 maganda.angels
Please update again soon. Another excellent chapter!