for Freedom's Rise
43/14/2019 c16 MajorBlackHillFan
it's been 4 years, and there isn't even a chapter on the coup yet, are you gonna update anytime soon? but otherwise good story so far
it's been 4 years, and there isn't even a chapter on the coup yet, are you gonna update anytime soon? but otherwise good story so far
10/21/2017 c15 Freoborn1980
This is a excellent story shame you never finished it hopefully one day soon real life allows to to finish it
This is a excellent story shame you never finished it hopefully one day soon real life allows to to finish it
10/10/2017 c16 andrewpine
Well crap I thought this story was complete or I never would have started to read it.I hate reading incomplete stories since I don't know if the writer is just going to disappear for months or years.
Well crap I thought this story was complete or I never would have started to read it.I hate reading incomplete stories since I don't know if the writer is just going to disappear for months or years.
10/10/2017 c12 andrewpine
I hope you. don't plan on turning Bella and the other two into squirrel munchers.
I hope you. don't plan on turning Bella and the other two into squirrel munchers.
10/10/2017 c10 andrewpine
As long as you don't write of instead of off we are good;).shame they can't kill her if they do Peter won't meet Char who I am guessing was turned by one of the sisters.
As long as you don't write of instead of off we are good;).shame they can't kill her if they do Peter won't meet Char who I am guessing was turned by one of the sisters.
10/9/2017 c8 andrewpine
She should eat the drunk it's better for their future then eating Bambi..I wonder if Alice is having visions of Jasper still?
She should eat the drunk it's better for their future then eating Bambi..I wonder if Alice is having visions of Jasper still?
10/9/2017 c4 andrewpine
Will she only have the gifts she woke up with or is she a sponge and will. add more to her list I wonder?
Will she only have the gifts she woke up with or is she a sponge and will. add more to her list I wonder?
10/9/2017 c3 andrewpine
Not sure about the common thread,but if she can do what she has and more once she kills Maria she should be able to go back and still run her the guys help she could probably expand it and make bigger then the other ones.
Not sure about the common thread,but if she can do what she has and more once she kills Maria she should be able to go back and still run her the guys help she could probably expand it and make bigger then the other ones.
10/9/2017 c2 andrewpine
What I have never understand is why if Jasper is an empath why he never used his gift and got rid of M dump her full fear then richer apart and burn her.
What I have never understand is why if Jasper is an empath why he never used his gift and got rid of M dump her full fear then richer apart and burn her.