
9/29/2011 c1 Anonymous
OOH! This is really good! UPDATE! Update or I will find Jean and have him hit you with a wet fish whiling yelling at you in French!
OOH! This is really good! UPDATE! Update or I will find Jean and have him hit you with a wet fish whiling yelling at you in French!
10/28/2009 c1
9nineteennintytwo
Yeah, I know I've reviewed already, but my first was an anonimous review, so I'll just review again! Mainly because I have an idea.
I was originally going to use it myself, but I have so many fics to be getting on with, I don't think I'll have time. So basically, this could be an AU story. AU as in, Arabella doesn't leave with her mother, as well as Jean, Tumen and Constance. That aside, I'll give you the real plot idea.
They could visit a native island, where a child prince (about eight-years-old) decides that he wants Arabella as his wife. So in order to get out of it, Arabella says that she's already engaged to Jack (since he was the closest person to her). But the natives want proof, so arange the marriage, and Jack and Arabella end up married! Then, there could be lots of little misadventures (title in mind) including Fitz getting jelous, Teague showing up, Laura getting angry, and maybe Billy even making an appearance! And if you want to have an OC character, how about Jack has a little sister in it?
Is this idea good? Or does it give you any ideas, at least?
nineteennintytwo

Yeah, I know I've reviewed already, but my first was an anonimous review, so I'll just review again! Mainly because I have an idea.
I was originally going to use it myself, but I have so many fics to be getting on with, I don't think I'll have time. So basically, this could be an AU story. AU as in, Arabella doesn't leave with her mother, as well as Jean, Tumen and Constance. That aside, I'll give you the real plot idea.
They could visit a native island, where a child prince (about eight-years-old) decides that he wants Arabella as his wife. So in order to get out of it, Arabella says that she's already engaged to Jack (since he was the closest person to her). But the natives want proof, so arange the marriage, and Jack and Arabella end up married! Then, there could be lots of little misadventures (title in mind) including Fitz getting jelous, Teague showing up, Laura getting angry, and maybe Billy even making an appearance! And if you want to have an OC character, how about Jack has a little sister in it?
Is this idea good? Or does it give you any ideas, at least?
nineteennintytwo
8/25/2009 c1
4Oceangoddess
I LOVE TEENAGE JACK! My favorite part was Jack and Fitzy fighting and Fitzy was like LISTEN TO ME!

I LOVE TEENAGE JACK! My favorite part was Jack and Fitzy fighting and Fitzy was like LISTEN TO ME!
8/24/2009 c1
3Piratess-Bell
Gah! This is glorious! I've missed your writing, Gypsy, darling. This is just lovely writing! I've been in dire need of some classic Barnacle crew fun and misadventures! I need the old crew... OC's are nice, and Pirates of the Caribbean remakes are entertaining, but the simple chemistry of Jack's first crew is my favorite to read. I have high hopes for this story, please keep it up!
-Bell

Gah! This is glorious! I've missed your writing, Gypsy, darling. This is just lovely writing! I've been in dire need of some classic Barnacle crew fun and misadventures! I need the old crew... OC's are nice, and Pirates of the Caribbean remakes are entertaining, but the simple chemistry of Jack's first crew is my favorite to read. I have high hopes for this story, please keep it up!
-Bell
8/24/2009 c1 ILP0420
YAY! YOU'RE BACK! YAY! YAY! YAY! More lovely stories that... I love? Yes, that works out! 'Cos so far, I LOVE IT! Haha! I can't wait to read more! I'm dying to see what happens next! xD AND it was written so well! Gah, I'm in heaven!
I LOVED the little argument between Jack and Fitzy! It's so brilliantly brilliant when they argue! :) I love it!
Oh I can't wait for more! You have my undivided attetntion... mwhaha! Now please, please promise me you'll update soon!
YAY! YOU'RE BACK! YAY! YAY! YAY! More lovely stories that... I love? Yes, that works out! 'Cos so far, I LOVE IT! Haha! I can't wait to read more! I'm dying to see what happens next! xD AND it was written so well! Gah, I'm in heaven!
I LOVED the little argument between Jack and Fitzy! It's so brilliantly brilliant when they argue! :) I love it!
Oh I can't wait for more! You have my undivided attetntion... mwhaha! Now please, please promise me you'll update soon!
8/23/2009 c1 nineteennintytwo
Seems good so far, and I like how you kept them all in character.
Seems good so far, and I like how you kept them all in character.