for Suicidal Beginning1/6/2016 c6 
1raven1214
U should have a chapter where they are married and then a chapter about their kids
1raven1214U should have a chapter where they are married and then a chapter about their kids
2/5/2012 c1 2Ms. Amateur
huh? itachi? i swear this is a gaahina. oh well it'll prolly change mainiez soon.
2Ms. Amateurhuh? itachi? i swear this is a gaahina. oh well it'll prolly change mainiez soon.
4/10/2011 c4 Beautiful-Liar360
uhm i love this story but im sooo confused didnt she want to fuck itachi 4ever or maybe this is part of the plot or something oh well this is good to :P
uhm i love this story but im sooo confused didnt she want to fuck itachi 4ever or maybe this is part of the plot or something oh well this is good to :P
4/2/2011 c4 11winterkaguya
Awesome GaaHina! Love the chemistry and sensuality between them. I think GaaHina works better here than ItaHina though I wonder what did happen to Itachi? Since this is a ItaHina story?
Anyways, hope you'll update soon!
11winterkaguyaAwesome GaaHina! Love the chemistry and sensuality between them. I think GaaHina works better here than ItaHina though I wonder what did happen to Itachi? Since this is a ItaHina story?
Anyways, hope you'll update soon!
3/13/2011 c4 3KagomeMarie
eh no thanks way to fast i think i will take my exit from this story now good luck
3KagomeMarieeh no thanks way to fast i think i will take my exit from this story now good luck
8/27/2009 c1 Darth-Taisha
The writing is good, but you really need to do a spell check on it. It makes it hard to read when there are so many obvious spelling errors. Anyway, like I said the story and premise are excellent, just go through and proof it some more:)
The writing is good, but you really need to do a spell check on it. It makes it hard to read when there are so many obvious spelling errors. Anyway, like I said the story and premise are excellent, just go through and proof it some more:)