for Midnight Flower12/30/2010 c1 MackaySceneGirl
I love this story! Please continue! (:
I love this story! Please continue! (:
7/11/2010 c1 
11Admerxin13
Wow this is really interesting! I like how you said how she walked, not even brushing the fey around her! Please update this! I can't wait for the next chappie!
11Admerxin13Wow this is really interesting! I like how you said how she walked, not even brushing the fey around her! Please update this! I can't wait for the next chappie!
6/23/2010 c1 3SighNoMore11
I don't know know why you haven't updated this but I really like this story. the plot is interesting to me and I hope you do decide to add more to it soon.
3SighNoMore11I don't know know why you haven't updated this but I really like this story. the plot is interesting to me and I hope you do decide to add more to it soon.
4/26/2010 c1 midnightsunshine11
u had better kep writing, it sounds interesting. Keep up the good work. Please keep writing.
u had better kep writing, it sounds interesting. Keep up the good work. Please keep writing.
4/18/2010 c1 Tayler
OMG Love It plz update soon
OMG Love It plz update soon
12/10/2009 c1 LovingBlackParadise
i liked it i thnk you should continue ..but just formt he girls pov
i liked it i thnk you should continue ..but just formt he girls pov
9/7/2009 c1 mianafirefly
Hello dear Writer,
this was absolutely beautiful. I loved these written words, adored each sentence.
How come this is so beautiful?
I definitely fell in love with your OC and you strengthen my loved for the infamous Gancanagh, Niall.
You, did.
Awh, this was so beautiful. I wonder what'll happen next.
Please update soon. I promise you, I will read & always review.
xoxo's
Miana 3
Hello dear Writer,
this was absolutely beautiful. I loved these written words, adored each sentence.
How come this is so beautiful?
I definitely fell in love with your OC and you strengthen my loved for the infamous Gancanagh, Niall.
You, did.
Awh, this was so beautiful. I wonder what'll happen next.
Please update soon. I promise you, I will read & always review.
xoxo's
Miana 3
9/4/2009 c1 21996thomas
I really liked this, though I wish Lesile and Niall were togethor but that's just not going to happen. This new girl is a really cool, slick character. Thanks for writing and I'll keep on reading.
21996thomasI really liked this, though I wish Lesile and Niall were togethor but that's just not going to happen. This new girl is a really cool, slick character. Thanks for writing and I'll keep on reading.
9/4/2009 c1 multicoloredpens
great! I love how descriptive you are, you're really good at painting a picture in the reader's mind. Please keep writing?
great! I love how descriptive you are, you're really good at painting a picture in the reader's mind. Please keep writing?
8/25/2009 c1 7Hatsuka
And you say I'M the one with the ninja writing skills?
This is AMAZING.
In fact, it makes me slightly want to kill you. Haha.
I particularly love your descriptions -
"Her hair, darker than the shadows crawling from his skin coiled and twisted down her back, just as attuned as she was to the music. Her body was undulating like water, twirling like leaves in the wind, not beating, convulsing in a desperate attempt to fit in with the resonating notes, but dancing to her own song, to what she heard in the music. Her eyes were closed absorbing the music, becoming one with it. Her pale skin glowed in the unnatural blue light like moonlight."
- my favourite bit :).
Well done!
7HatsukaAnd you say I'M the one with the ninja writing skills?
This is AMAZING.
In fact, it makes me slightly want to kill you. Haha.
I particularly love your descriptions -
"Her hair, darker than the shadows crawling from his skin coiled and twisted down her back, just as attuned as she was to the music. Her body was undulating like water, twirling like leaves in the wind, not beating, convulsing in a desperate attempt to fit in with the resonating notes, but dancing to her own song, to what she heard in the music. Her eyes were closed absorbing the music, becoming one with it. Her pale skin glowed in the unnatural blue light like moonlight."
- my favourite bit :).
Well done!