for Island Angst8/28/2009 c1 
6Golden-Black Dragon
Well, if Jack's plan fails, he'll get blamed for it no matter what happens. And women don't want to be with Jack anyway. Well, Kate kinda dumped Sawyer for Jack so Sawyer's justified in throwing cocunuts at her.
6Golden-Black DragonWell, if Jack's plan fails, he'll get blamed for it no matter what happens. And women don't want to be with Jack anyway. Well, Kate kinda dumped Sawyer for Jack so Sawyer's justified in throwing cocunuts at her.
8/27/2009 c1 1Timeloopy
I love the way this flows. Very poetic. . .the language is lovely. And now I almost feel sorry for Jack and I almost never feel sorry for him. Loved the little chuckle with Sawyer throwing things at Kate to get her to go away. Nice touch. . .Loved it!
1TimeloopyI love the way this flows. Very poetic. . .the language is lovely. And now I almost feel sorry for Jack and I almost never feel sorry for him. Loved the little chuckle with Sawyer throwing things at Kate to get her to go away. Nice touch. . .Loved it!
8/26/2009 c1 47kab16
i liked this. You did a good job getting into Jack's head and the way people might treat him in that situation was very believable.
47kab16i liked this. You did a good job getting into Jack's head and the way people might treat him in that situation was very believable.
8/26/2009 c1 Ilayda
Aw, poor Jack, I felt sorry for him poor guy. I laughed though at the coconut part! That was funny.
Aw, poor Jack, I felt sorry for him poor guy. I laughed though at the coconut part! That was funny.