for Night Of Fate1/12/2022 c9 Guest
Hi,
I think you developed a really interesting and quite unique story line. If you ever decide to continue, I would happily read the whole story, but I don't want to pressure you into anything.
PS: English isn't my first language, so I hope it's understandable.
Hi,
I think you developed a really interesting and quite unique story line. If you ever decide to continue, I would happily read the whole story, but I don't want to pressure you into anything.
PS: English isn't my first language, so I hope it's understandable.
12/5/2021 c9 rowenasheir
2021 a veryshoet hiatus... ha! No it has been abandoned. Pity no-one finished it for you!
2021 a veryshoet hiatus... ha! No it has been abandoned. Pity no-one finished it for you!
3/1/2018 c9 SilverRosehp
Please update your story soon I absolutely love it and hope you continue it soon please
Please update your story soon I absolutely love it and hope you continue it soon please
2/4/2018 c9 Guest
Please write more
Please write more
28/13/2016 c9 kitten-dreamer
Hi there, it's been almost 6 years since an update on this story so I assume it's abandoned... but, I wanted to let you know that you have a good idea here and a good plotline. You could probably benefit from an editor/beta to correct some small English language mistakes, but overall it reads well. In the end of ch 8, you asked your readers if Draco should tell Harry the truth about his father. I would say "yes" and have Harry keep it a secret, pull away more from James, and let that spark James to be curious and lead to the ultimate discovery over the following years. The creature mystery is also intriguing -which creature? Anyways, I'm sad this story is done, but if you ever pick it up again, I got it on an alert. If you perhaps moved it to AO3 or elsewhere, let me know! Thank you.
Hi there, it's been almost 6 years since an update on this story so I assume it's abandoned... but, I wanted to let you know that you have a good idea here and a good plotline. You could probably benefit from an editor/beta to correct some small English language mistakes, but overall it reads well. In the end of ch 8, you asked your readers if Draco should tell Harry the truth about his father. I would say "yes" and have Harry keep it a secret, pull away more from James, and let that spark James to be curious and lead to the ultimate discovery over the following years. The creature mystery is also intriguing -which creature? Anyways, I'm sad this story is done, but if you ever pick it up again, I got it on an alert. If you perhaps moved it to AO3 or elsewhere, let me know! Thank you.
10/26/2014 c9 Julia Ba
It was a lovely story. I thought you'd make Harry remember something of his first life but may be you were planning it for later? Anyway it was a pleasant read, thank you!
It was a lovely story. I thought you'd make Harry remember something of his first life but may be you were planning it for later? Anyway it was a pleasant read, thank you!
8/19/2014 c9 solsere
Really interesting premise! Greatly enjoyed what you have up so far. If you ever decide to continue the story, I'm sure lots of people (myself included) would be ecstatic. I'm super curious what kind of creature inheritance Harry got; the connection between Harry's pervious life and his one; why Fate chose to do what it did...
Really interesting premise! Greatly enjoyed what you have up so far. If you ever decide to continue the story, I'm sure lots of people (myself included) would be ecstatic. I'm super curious what kind of creature inheritance Harry got; the connection between Harry's pervious life and his one; why Fate chose to do what it did...
8/10/2014 c2 KrystalMyashi
The story idea is interesting and all, but how the fuck could Voldemort have immediately known who was referred to in the Prophecy? And it's ridiculous that a Prophecy would be made of someone already a year old, he shouldn't even be born yet for it to make sense.
The story idea is interesting and all, but how the fuck could Voldemort have immediately known who was referred to in the Prophecy? And it's ridiculous that a Prophecy would be made of someone already a year old, he shouldn't even be born yet for it to make sense.