for LIFE Insatiable6/20/2011 c1 
17Anonymous 01925
WHY'D YOU TAKE OUT THE SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEX...?
Oh man..!
And also, I enjoyed the whole story as well ^^
17Anonymous 01925WHY'D YOU TAKE OUT THE SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEX...?
Oh man..!
And also, I enjoyed the whole story as well ^^
3/20/2011 c1 8Gamer551
XD that was the cutest thing ever... :) I love Zidane so muchz he makes me smile, and I think you depicted him perfectly :) amazing writing and amazing story :)
8Gamer551XD that was the cutest thing ever... :) I love Zidane so muchz he makes me smile, and I think you depicted him perfectly :) amazing writing and amazing story :)
12/8/2009 c1 Legion Of Bunnies
I also read this on AFFnet, and this story was...Wow. I absolutely loved it. Nothing seemed rushed at all, nor did it drag. It was just right.
You have an AMAZING ability at keeping these two in character, which is great for all readers. Loved it so much, I recommended it to others, who also enjoyed it. Do keep writing.
As a writer myself, you are truly an inspiration to me. Hope to see you come up with more FFIX fics in the future!~
I also read this on AFFnet, and this story was...Wow. I absolutely loved it. Nothing seemed rushed at all, nor did it drag. It was just right.
You have an AMAZING ability at keeping these two in character, which is great for all readers. Loved it so much, I recommended it to others, who also enjoyed it. Do keep writing.
As a writer myself, you are truly an inspiration to me. Hope to see you come up with more FFIX fics in the future!~
8/31/2009 c1 Mawshi
Ugh, I'm not good at writing my opinion, but I really loved it! Alot. And knowing you're still working on Abnormalities makes me really happy. I've been looking forward to an update of that story. ^^ Keep it up
Ugh, I'm not good at writing my opinion, but I really loved it! Alot. And knowing you're still working on Abnormalities makes me really happy. I've been looking forward to an update of that story. ^^ Keep it up
8/28/2009 c1 Salvia492
First off, I would like to thank you for making Blank the seme. Most yaoi stories horribly mangle Blank and Zidane’s characterization, but you seamlessly put both characters into this situation without changing one thing about their personalities. Bravo!
I also loved how you focused on the friendship between Blank and Zidane first, as that really made their feelings for each other seem sincere. The sex also wasn’t mindless or rushed, which made their relationship seem much more realistic.
There were a few mistakes, but I’d say you did quite well without a beta reader. I’d like to address the rating you put for the story, though, as FFnet doesn’t allow NC-17 stories, anymore. Just to avoid being reported, I would have that changed to an M rating. (I realize you’re moving this story and others to AFFnet soon, but until you do so I would change the rating. Something as trivial as this is not worth jeopardizing your account with.)
Thank you for the wonderful read! I look forward to reading your other stories.
First off, I would like to thank you for making Blank the seme. Most yaoi stories horribly mangle Blank and Zidane’s characterization, but you seamlessly put both characters into this situation without changing one thing about their personalities. Bravo!
I also loved how you focused on the friendship between Blank and Zidane first, as that really made their feelings for each other seem sincere. The sex also wasn’t mindless or rushed, which made their relationship seem much more realistic.
There were a few mistakes, but I’d say you did quite well without a beta reader. I’d like to address the rating you put for the story, though, as FFnet doesn’t allow NC-17 stories, anymore. Just to avoid being reported, I would have that changed to an M rating. (I realize you’re moving this story and others to AFFnet soon, but until you do so I would change the rating. Something as trivial as this is not worth jeopardizing your account with.)
Thank you for the wonderful read! I look forward to reading your other stories.