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6/20 c1 Guest
This os trash period
12/20/2021 c1 TITO Skeleton
Quite honestly I like the story once I get over the spelling mistakes and punctuation issues. My advice is to either rewrite it or edit it to fix it quickly.
9/24/2021 c4 Dracoessa Draga
Konoha is full of stickflippers.
2/23/2021 c5 12Iron M. Writer
so cheesy
11/19/2020 c1 Guest
Ah yes, sweet, SWEET revenge. That's what I'm talking about. Welp karma's a bitch, after all.
9/4/2019 c3 omegaderose
seriously rewrite this shit and work on your spelling how old are you 10
4/8/2019 c1 omegaderose
seriousdly are you to stupid to make " when someone tlaks it is hard to read this shit
3/7/2018 c1 Neptune
Going to take a wild guess here and say English is not your primary language, right?
2/28/2018 c15 Guest
Dear writer please make more chapters
1/3/2018 c1 TechnoGalen
Good theme, incredibly shit typing. Stop and do not continue until you can actually write.
8/18/2017 c10 My eyes
Jesus Christ on ice skates Batman. Learn how to write, my eyes hurt.
8/5/2017 c12 Guest
Gpod story but you need to have a good plot to it not some random stuff in there
7/23/2017 c15 M
Please update this soon
7/18/2017 c1 1Dante1154
get dont listen to these dick head comments I'm actually enjoying the story it's really fucking good so you should continue it
7/8/2017 c15 Guest
la suite de naruto de l'obscurité à la lumiére
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