for 10 Deaths2/10/2016 c1 Snowstar
nice description! Maybe do one on flametail?
nice description! Maybe do one on flametail?
12/30/2015 c9 StickfeatherShip
Ooh, do smokepaw next! You know who died on the great journey?
Ooh, do smokepaw next! You know who died on the great journey?
4/8/2015 c5 Jadyn
Intersting. I love it!
Intersting. I love it!
2/2/2014 c8 Cinderpaw
I thought she died because of somecat's kits?
I thought she died because of somecat's kits?
12/27/2012 c5 
4LunarGal12
YES! HAWKFROST WAS SUCH A BADASS! By the way this is not sarcasm at all! I truely think Hawkfrost was a badass!
4LunarGal12YES! HAWKFROST WAS SUCH A BADASS! By the way this is not sarcasm at all! I truely think Hawkfrost was a badass!
9/16/2012 c9 Me
Can you do a chapter about Spottedleaf's second death? Or Redtail, or Mistystar's brother? (I can't remember his name right now).
Can you do a chapter about Spottedleaf's second death? Or Redtail, or Mistystar's brother? (I can't remember his name right now).
9/16/2012 c1 Me
Awesome!
Awesome!
8/4/2012 c8 Dalila
I loved your story and that shadow clan cat was... YELLOWFANG!
I loved your story and that shadow clan cat was... YELLOWFANG!
7/13/2011 c8 idontwanttowritemyname
I think this is very good! I loved spottedleaf too! She was awesomeeeee. But it isn't fair! Stupid Clawface. I never really knew the real story but this is very interesting. Very interesting indeed.
I really do believe that Spottedleaf loved Firepaw/Fireheart/Firestar. I wish Spottedleaf had become a warrior before medicine cat apprentice as Spottedpaw, so she could have fought off that stupid Clawface! I hate him i hate him I HATE HIM! he is soooooooooooooooo mean!
If I were to rate this I would give it five stars!
I vow to set out for Clawface and dead or alive and string him up on my front porch even though he is dead... serves him right. (I know he is dead because I caught up with Erin Hunter and now I am on Crookedstar's Promise! :))
Remember, five stars! I hope you liked my perspective!
Bye!
PS- Did Clawface go to StarClan or The Dark Forest? Because he killed Spottedleaf personally and the Warrior Code says, "An intelligent warrior does not need to kill other warriors to win his battles." I respect that, and I do not like Clawface!D:
I think this is very good! I loved spottedleaf too! She was awesomeeeee. But it isn't fair! Stupid Clawface. I never really knew the real story but this is very interesting. Very interesting indeed.
I really do believe that Spottedleaf loved Firepaw/Fireheart/Firestar. I wish Spottedleaf had become a warrior before medicine cat apprentice as Spottedpaw, so she could have fought off that stupid Clawface! I hate him i hate him I HATE HIM! he is soooooooooooooooo mean!
If I were to rate this I would give it five stars!
I vow to set out for Clawface and dead or alive and string him up on my front porch even though he is dead... serves him right. (I know he is dead because I caught up with Erin Hunter and now I am on Crookedstar's Promise! :))
Remember, five stars! I hope you liked my perspective!
Bye!
PS- Did Clawface go to StarClan or The Dark Forest? Because he killed Spottedleaf personally and the Warrior Code says, "An intelligent warrior does not need to kill other warriors to win his battles." I respect that, and I do not like Clawface!D:
5/6/2011 c8 nrhs dcg
i hate my life
i hate my life
5/5/2011 c1 ann
this is the best one yet! love it man ! keep trying and you'll feel awsome.
this is the best one yet! love it man ! keep trying and you'll feel awsome.
5/5/2011 c7 ann
i think your doing a great job . your doing better than everyone else . all i do is draw the characters from shadowclan . you might become a famous author soon
i think your doing a great job . your doing better than everyone else . all i do is draw the characters from shadowclan . you might become a famous author soon
6/6/2010 c1 cleo
i think you should do snowfur's death (in bluestars prophecy)
i think you should do snowfur's death (in bluestars prophecy)