
6/6/2010 c1 courtney
i think you should write about scourge's death
i think you should write about scourge's death
2/23/2010 c1 cleo
i think you should do redtails death. i still hate firestar\fireheart\firepaw. i wish scourge killed firestare 500 times.i love scourge and other evil cats.
i think you should do redtails death. i still hate firestar\fireheart\firepaw. i wish scourge killed firestare 500 times.i love scourge and other evil cats.
1/21/2010 c6 CLEO
I READ ALL OF THEM i still think you should add redtall's death i loved them all but i am not saying iam happ that they died
I READ ALL OF THEM i still think you should add redtall's death i loved them all but i am not saying iam happ that they died
12/15/2009 c1 cleo
i have never heard of the dark forset but it was cool.the death is in #6 the darkest hour
i have never heard of the dark forset but it was cool.the death is in #6 the darkest hour
9/18/2009 c7 Sunnyfur
How about Hollyleaf's death(am I brilliant or am I brilliant)? I don't like her- at all- but her point of view needs to be explored. End of story(no is not an answer. Is it? OH, come on, just give me a chance!)
How about Hollyleaf's death(am I brilliant or am I brilliant)? I don't like her- at all- but her point of view needs to be explored. End of story(no is not an answer. Is it? OH, come on, just give me a chance!)
9/18/2009 c7
8AlyGone
great chapters! poor Shrewpaw and Cinderpelt...hm...another death? Lets see...How about Stonepelt? He was Bluestars son who died protecting Stormpaw and Featherpaw from Tigerstar. HE disobaied when Tigerstar ordered him to kill them so Tigerstar sent Darkkstripe to kill him but when Darkstripe couldnt by himself he also sent Blackfoot(Blackstar)
lol. i cant belive i remember that...i havent read the 2nd seies in ages...has it been over a year? yep. lol. okay well i cant wait to read more! :)

great chapters! poor Shrewpaw and Cinderpelt...hm...another death? Lets see...How about Stonepelt? He was Bluestars son who died protecting Stormpaw and Featherpaw from Tigerstar. HE disobaied when Tigerstar ordered him to kill them so Tigerstar sent Darkkstripe to kill him but when Darkstripe couldnt by himself he also sent Blackfoot(Blackstar)
lol. i cant belive i remember that...i havent read the 2nd seies in ages...has it been over a year? yep. lol. okay well i cant wait to read more! :)
9/6/2009 c4
2The Mindless Opal
I loved it, and maybe some deaths are:
BlueStar
*
SwiftPaw
*
CinderPelt
*
HawkFrost
*

I loved it, and maybe some deaths are:
BlueStar
*
SwiftPaw
*
CinderPelt
*
HawkFrost
*
9/2/2009 c1
1Lunastar31
here are some deaths you could do:
Shrewpaw
Oakheart
Stonefur
Spottedleaf
Willowpelt
Brindleface
Runningwind
Cinderpelt
Silverstream
Brokentail
Hawkfrost
Hope you use some!

here are some deaths you could do:
Shrewpaw
Oakheart
Stonefur
Spottedleaf
Willowpelt
Brindleface
Runningwind
Cinderpelt
Silverstream
Brokentail
Hawkfrost
Hope you use some!
9/2/2009 c2
8Mysticbreeze327
Snowfur's death isn't often writen about so i suggest that
Good story
i feel sorry for Tadpole
Mysticbreeze

Snowfur's death isn't often writen about so i suggest that
Good story
i feel sorry for Tadpole
Mysticbreeze