for And We All Fall Down10/25/2020 c38 tabrizia
Love love love this story! Excellent character development and storyline, would love if you continued!
Love love love this story! Excellent character development and storyline, would love if you continued!
3/17/2016 c39 
8remakemyday
It's been long since this story was updated, but I hope you can pick this up again. I love this type of Dramione :'D more power to you!
8remakemydayIt's been long since this story was updated, but I hope you can pick this up again. I love this type of Dramione :'D more power to you!
8/3/2012 c39 5Ceralyn
Wow. Harry is horrifying to read about. I'm hoping he gets his due soon, but I guess that won't happen until the near end of the story.
Draco's amazing, and I love a reformed Draco with Hermione.
Great story overall, and I look forward to reading more!
5CeralynWow. Harry is horrifying to read about. I'm hoping he gets his due soon, but I guess that won't happen until the near end of the story.
Draco's amazing, and I love a reformed Draco with Hermione.
Great story overall, and I look forward to reading more!
5/4/2012 c39 Mrs. Regulus Arcturus Black
Aaaaaaah! That was amazing set of new chapters! I had to reread the whole story but it was so worth it! Thank you for the good read! I am glad you got your muse again.
Mrs. R.A.B.
Aaaaaaah! That was amazing set of new chapters! I had to reread the whole story but it was so worth it! Thank you for the good read! I am glad you got your muse again.
Mrs. R.A.B.
11/8/2011 c33 Mrs. Regulus Arcturus Black
I have to say I agree with AWellRoundedCritique. I constantly find myself coming back to see if you have updated the fic. I, too, am baffled that you have a minimum numbers of reviews.
I have to say that I don't read unfinished stories very often, but when I found your story in my sister's ipod it hooked me in. And I could say I didn't cared of it's status it was a bloody good story and I was going to finish reading it. I am not ashamed to say that I've read it twice now and it still makes me smile at your talent. I hope you find a way to end the story.
Patiently waiting,
Mrs. R.A.B.
I have to say I agree with AWellRoundedCritique. I constantly find myself coming back to see if you have updated the fic. I, too, am baffled that you have a minimum numbers of reviews.
I have to say that I don't read unfinished stories very often, but when I found your story in my sister's ipod it hooked me in. And I could say I didn't cared of it's status it was a bloody good story and I was going to finish reading it. I am not ashamed to say that I've read it twice now and it still makes me smile at your talent. I hope you find a way to end the story.
Patiently waiting,
Mrs. R.A.B.
9/24/2011 c33 AWellRoundedCritique
I never review.Ever. Mainly because i struggle with what to say. But for you and for this story i make an exception. Rarely do i read something that grips me so tightly that i feel frustrated at the lack of more. Indeed, i can count on one hand the number of fanfics i have read that have done this to me. Yours is one of them - and to put it in further perspective the infamous 'Broken' is one of the others.
The unique storyline, well woven plot and expertly written characters are on their own, fantastic. But as a combination they are a powerhouse.
The only critique i've found is the repetative line sequence in chapter 10, but i'm more than willing to overlook that when i continue on and find your incorporation of branches of magic rarely touched upon in HP.
How you only have 41 reviews is beyond me. I hope that you continue it and i relish the thought of reading it when you do.
I never review.Ever. Mainly because i struggle with what to say. But for you and for this story i make an exception. Rarely do i read something that grips me so tightly that i feel frustrated at the lack of more. Indeed, i can count on one hand the number of fanfics i have read that have done this to me. Yours is one of them - and to put it in further perspective the infamous 'Broken' is one of the others.
The unique storyline, well woven plot and expertly written characters are on their own, fantastic. But as a combination they are a powerhouse.
The only critique i've found is the repetative line sequence in chapter 10, but i'm more than willing to overlook that when i continue on and find your incorporation of branches of magic rarely touched upon in HP.
How you only have 41 reviews is beyond me. I hope that you continue it and i relish the thought of reading it when you do.
11/22/2010 c34 2battygirl123
Wow this is amazing. I always love stories where Hermione has her own agenda. This story seems to be developing nicely. I encourage you to continue finishing it because it seems to be going well. Good job.
2battygirl123Wow this is amazing. I always love stories where Hermione has her own agenda. This story seems to be developing nicely. I encourage you to continue finishing it because it seems to be going well. Good job.
8/30/2010 c34 boohoo
wow love this fanfic keep going with it next chapter please?
wow love this fanfic keep going with it next chapter please?
8/10/2010 c31 Guest
Holy Merlin! You are indeed a master storyteller! This is beyond brilliant. More I daresay, more!
Holy Merlin! You are indeed a master storyteller! This is beyond brilliant. More I daresay, more!
8/4/2010 c31 Pixie-Fate
I think that your story is very well written and has a good plot going. I hope that you can update soon.
The reason for the review is that it struck me how similar the basic plotline is to Geroge Orwell's Animal Farm. The whole power corrupts, and the people who get marginalized are the ones that have to take hold of the situation and try to right it.
Anyways this is a good story and I cant wait to read more.
Pixie
I think that your story is very well written and has a good plot going. I hope that you can update soon.
The reason for the review is that it struck me how similar the basic plotline is to Geroge Orwell's Animal Farm. The whole power corrupts, and the people who get marginalized are the ones that have to take hold of the situation and try to right it.
Anyways this is a good story and I cant wait to read more.
Pixie
7/18/2010 c31 6Jade2099
This story has simply captivated me! It's just the right mix of dark and light - very realistic (or what I would expect to be realistic) after the war. Draco and Hermione - just LOVE them. Well done! Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
6Jade2099This story has simply captivated me! It's just the right mix of dark and light - very realistic (or what I would expect to be realistic) after the war. Draco and Hermione - just LOVE them. Well done! Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
3/17/2010 c14 6Ayriannah
I was right!...sort of. residual magic, driving him amoral instead of residual soul driving him insane. yours has less of a happy ending, I fear...
6AyriannahI was right!...sort of. residual magic, driving him amoral instead of residual soul driving him insane. yours has less of a happy ending, I fear...
3/17/2010 c12 Ayriannah
very good story, and now I have to know if my guess is right. If this is DH compliant, just AU, then Harry never nearly died. He still has a piece of Voldy's soul in his head, and it's driving him insane. He's even lost his bright green eyes, what with the red mixing in...and now I continue to read to see if I'm right.
very good story, and now I have to know if my guess is right. If this is DH compliant, just AU, then Harry never nearly died. He still has a piece of Voldy's soul in his head, and it's driving him insane. He's even lost his bright green eyes, what with the red mixing in...and now I continue to read to see if I'm right.