for Observations9/11/2009 c1 
13LouphiaTheHobbit
WOW! That's the kind of story I like! I want more of this secret George/ Angelina stuff! You did a really good job!
13LouphiaTheHobbitWOW! That's the kind of story I like! I want more of this secret George/ Angelina stuff! You did a really good job!
8/30/2009 c1 43dork-with-glasses
i really enjoy it. i don't usually read george/angelina (in fact i have only read one other one) but the summary caught my eye so i decided to give it a go and i really liked it.
i thought you captured the differences and simialrites in fred and george really well.
in short, i really liked it.
and don't worry about the spelling and grammar, mine sucks too.
43dork-with-glassesi really enjoy it. i don't usually read george/angelina (in fact i have only read one other one) but the summary caught my eye so i decided to give it a go and i really liked it.
i thought you captured the differences and simialrites in fred and george really well.
in short, i really liked it.
and don't worry about the spelling and grammar, mine sucks too.
8/30/2009 c1 3truest-of-true-loves
It was short, but sweet. Though I think I would have liked it better if Katie's explanation on how the twins were different was bigger. That part was actually a little confusing, and not very natural sounding. Also, I think if there was a bit of more humor and jokes about more than just Fred and Angelina, like the rest of the couples around, talking about the competition, etc., it would have brought more life to the one-shot.
Your actual style of writing is straight forward, and it has a simple and likable tone to it, but the details were a bit anti-climactic.
:D Keep on writing!
3truest-of-true-lovesIt was short, but sweet. Though I think I would have liked it better if Katie's explanation on how the twins were different was bigger. That part was actually a little confusing, and not very natural sounding. Also, I think if there was a bit of more humor and jokes about more than just Fred and Angelina, like the rest of the couples around, talking about the competition, etc., it would have brought more life to the one-shot.
Your actual style of writing is straight forward, and it has a simple and likable tone to it, but the details were a bit anti-climactic.
:D Keep on writing!