for The Wolves of Earth and Sun5/24/2013 c51 
1gama988
Please continue this series I don't care if you discontinued it restart it I want to see the end
1gama988Please continue this series I don't care if you discontinued it restart it I want to see the end
2/18/2011 c1 5Dark5pectre
Before reading: I'm actually surprised. I haven't even read anything yet, and have been enticed to review.
51 chapters! and only 20 reviews? That is quite surprising, thus I think I will stick around and read this through.
After reading: I haven't read much yet, but this story seems good. I know it says discontinued, but I think I will story alert it anyway, just in case...
5Dark5pectreBefore reading: I'm actually surprised. I haven't even read anything yet, and have been enticed to review.
51 chapters! and only 20 reviews? That is quite surprising, thus I think I will stick around and read this through.
After reading: I haven't read much yet, but this story seems good. I know it says discontinued, but I think I will story alert it anyway, just in case...
6/3/2010 c1 2Deltathewolf
I Rarerly comment on stories, so this one must be pretty good.
I like your ideas and storyline, and it flows smoothly throughout,with very little rough spots. And so I am adding this to my faveorits, keep up the good work!
-Delta-
2DeltathewolfI Rarerly comment on stories, so this one must be pretty good.
I like your ideas and storyline, and it flows smoothly throughout,with very little rough spots. And so I am adding this to my faveorits, keep up the good work!
-Delta-
4/13/2010 c39 Reclusive Dork
Awesome! This story isso good, I'm reading it a SECOND time while waiting for the updates! However... "The scythe's metal was a jade green while the metal was a brown color like wood..." ...You got a grammar error there. Did you mean 'while the HANDLE was a brown color like wood'?
Awesome! This story isso good, I'm reading it a SECOND time while waiting for the updates! However... "The scythe's metal was a jade green while the metal was a brown color like wood..." ...You got a grammar error there. Did you mean 'while the HANDLE was a brown color like wood'?
12/7/2009 c38 7Raine Moon
That chap was fun, but what about the copyrights, Shonen Jump owns that scene where you explain Ishimaru/Saruta's past. I know it since I've watched Naruto and I saw that scene , but dont be afraid, I'm going to tell anyone about it
7Raine MoonThat chap was fun, but what about the copyrights, Shonen Jump owns that scene where you explain Ishimaru/Saruta's past. I know it since I've watched Naruto and I saw that scene , but dont be afraid, I'm going to tell anyone about it
11/28/2009 c34 1Thorns4Claws
I love this story, please continue writing! That was a good surprise too, having Byakko killed by Deathscythe instead of by Ishimaru.
1Thorns4ClawsI love this story, please continue writing! That was a good surprise too, having Byakko killed by Deathscythe instead of by Ishimaru.
10/24/2009 c24 Fflover44
I feel sorry for you not getting much review, im comign up to exams and even i have hard time reviewing stuffs nowadays, but i will continue to read and possibly review as all of us keep going.
I feel sorry for you not getting much review, im comign up to exams and even i have hard time reviewing stuffs nowadays, but i will continue to read and possibly review as all of us keep going.
10/21/2009 c22 7Raine Moon
Awesome chap, although its a little short but thinking that you were out of inspiration, its understandable. But I hope you're not gonna do what I'm thinkin' cause that would be a lot more awesome that ever
7Raine MoonAwesome chap, although its a little short but thinking that you were out of inspiration, its understandable. But I hope you're not gonna do what I'm thinkin' cause that would be a lot more awesome that ever
10/18/2009 c21 Fflover44
Something feels a bit awkward in this story... and i cnat find the right word for it yet... maybe the character's development was a bit too fast for a normal story... i'm not sure, but i think you can definitely add a bit more detail in ishimarus thought and other stuff than you can already. oh yeah the bad guys arent very well descripted, i know that they're hiding and watching in a secret spot right now as the battle wages on but i think it might be worthwhile to explain them in a better way, try and make them seem less mysterious maybe? im not sure, but i dont think there's a good flow if they are too mysterious.
your use of language was good, other than your storyline i cant think of what else to say...
i did notice the lack of review you're getting for your story that has gotten quite long by now.
i only read bits and pieces off your story, but i promise i'll have a much better review for your story when i read it all in detail.
Keep up your good work!:)
The Fanfictionlover
Something feels a bit awkward in this story... and i cnat find the right word for it yet... maybe the character's development was a bit too fast for a normal story... i'm not sure, but i think you can definitely add a bit more detail in ishimarus thought and other stuff than you can already. oh yeah the bad guys arent very well descripted, i know that they're hiding and watching in a secret spot right now as the battle wages on but i think it might be worthwhile to explain them in a better way, try and make them seem less mysterious maybe? im not sure, but i dont think there's a good flow if they are too mysterious.
your use of language was good, other than your storyline i cant think of what else to say...
i did notice the lack of review you're getting for your story that has gotten quite long by now.
i only read bits and pieces off your story, but i promise i'll have a much better review for your story when i read it all in detail.
Keep up your good work!:)
The Fanfictionlover
10/18/2009 c21 Raine Moon
Great chapter, good idea for Koryumaru, but please refrain from creating a zanpakuto similar to Byakuya's one. Byakuya is really over rated and too much powerful. But yeah good story at this point
Great chapter, good idea for Koryumaru, but please refrain from creating a zanpakuto similar to Byakuya's one. Byakuya is really over rated and too much powerful. But yeah good story at this point