for Daddy Lies2/21/2011 c1 g
oh this one's easy, cause he's an asshole! :p
oh this one's easy, cause he's an asshole! :p
5/17/2010 c1 
29Lupa Dracolis
Is it odd that the person I feel most sorry for is Dumbledore? Wow, this is... I'm not sure what the right word would be. Haunting, possibly.
29Lupa DracolisIs it odd that the person I feel most sorry for is Dumbledore? Wow, this is... I'm not sure what the right word would be. Haunting, possibly.
4/27/2010 c1 Ron'sCousin
I liked how it was more of a poem then a story. It was very interesting how you were able to tell a story threw questions. The only thing I didn't like was how sad it was. Although it was still very well written. Poetic.
I liked how it was more of a poem then a story. It was very interesting how you were able to tell a story threw questions. The only thing I didn't like was how sad it was. Although it was still very well written. Poetic.
1/10/2010 c1 23RavenEcho
Interesting, I suppose, though not the best work I've ever read. It would also be easier to read if it weren't in bold and in italics.
23RavenEchoInteresting, I suppose, though not the best work I've ever read. It would also be easier to read if it weren't in bold and in italics.
11/28/2009 c1 Maykai
Oh so sad.
i loved it.
poor innocent little boy having to see all that.
poor innocent little boy under the stairs, i wanted to cry.
Oh so sad.
i loved it.
poor innocent little boy having to see all that.
poor innocent little boy under the stairs, i wanted to cry.
9/1/2009 c1 4Ultimatly Heroic
Forgive me for stating the obvious but that was really sad =[
Good job thoughh,.
4Ultimatly HeroicForgive me for stating the obvious but that was really sad =[
Good job thoughh,.
9/1/2009 c1 17GiantInflatableWalrus
Great job; this has a lovely flow to it, a sort of rhythm - I like the balance of the morbid reality of what happened, and the child's innocent questioning.
17GiantInflatableWalrusGreat job; this has a lovely flow to it, a sort of rhythm - I like the balance of the morbid reality of what happened, and the child's innocent questioning.