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11/12/2014 c3 Guest
This is amazing! It definitely deserves more recognition but MAYBE YOU SHOULD UPDATE!
8/26/2013 c3 37Ersatz Einstein
"Up very soon?" Really? Ignoring the technical errors, I'd like to point out that you changed Benjamin/Elrich's name mid-chapter. That aside, I'd love to see where you're going with this.
7/29/2013 c3 Guest
interesting play on the nightmare before crimas
5/12/2013 c3 2ShaksieGirlBenniBoy
It's a good story so far. I'm liking where you are going and how you're getting there. The suspense might kill me, so you better get your updates up quick! You are also doing surprisingly well on your spelling and grammar. No offense, but most people on this site have trouble with that. Props to you!
2/3/2013 c3 a person
Can you please add another chapter. It is a great and interesting story.
10/8/2012 c3 Guest
Thisis good though you said you would update in a week when it's been about 3 years
7/9/2012 c3 brandon.ryan.7374
a vary toching chapter
7/9/2012 c2 brandon.ryan.7374
hm so jacks father is finkilsteins boss ironic but interesting
7/9/2012 c1 Guest
interasting story so far
6/11/2012 c2 2loverbird1999
Very good Descriptive detail In the story ! I Love how you make the story seem like a mystery !
5/6/2012 c3 6RTVampireKilljoy
I'm loving this story and hope you will update it some day soon :D
3/25/2012 c3 3Phantoms Lil Waffle
I love this story! 8D I hope someday you continue. And when you do. I'll be your faithful reviewer :D
3/4/2012 c3 Ryukn7
plz more chapters, this is a great story
12/9/2011 c3 A TNBC Fan
Please keep going.
11/14/2011 c1 37MonoSheep
Wow, this should be Jack Skellington, you make pretty much good! Keep it up!
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