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11/5/2010 c1 11Stranger-of-the-void
Yay, here is my promised review! I said i would check your stories out^^ Well, what to say about it...I like it.

Its nice and beautiful, although a bit short for my liking, but good stories don't have to be very long...

The format is suited for the text, since its no very long story, it gives space to let the song be more clear.

I like the story, its somehow...comforting,

to know, that in your story there's someone who is not afraid of Gaara, before he meets Naruto^^

I am interested what could happen next...

When will they meet again? How will their friendship be like? What will they talk about?

Could it become more then friendship?

Just something to say, maybe you should write a sequel to make more readers interested, this chapter alone may be beautiful,

but too short to get more attention...

Sadly thats a problem with self made characters, stories about them get barely attention, that's why i say: Write more!

go As Darkness Takes Over!

Kamo-chan
6/19/2010 c1 Insane Winxy
ohh. This was a nice One-shot...
1/21/2010 c1 7Arrancar open account
1 chapter realy unimpresive...
9/3/2009 c1 Lucy Ash Hawthorne
aw! so cute! i'm glad ppl believe Garra can have a friend!

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