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4/17/2010 c1 30Sophies-Welt
Lovely!
9/6/2009 c1 STLFAN
I like it - nice job
9/6/2009 c1 492The Readers Muse
First off I applaud you for your direction in this story. I am dieing to see the episode where we learn just how Abby and Gibbs first met. Because I just know that there is a great story to tell there.

You have a great idea here, and while it was a bit hard to follow in places, you have a lot of Abby's characterization down.

Do you have a beta reader? That might help you out. I know I adore mine, she picks up the little things that I don't even notice.

All in all, you show promise as a writer! I love the idea for this story. I could definately see the handcuff moment.

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