12/10/2009 c4 TwilightLover418
Great chapter! Definitely worth the wait. I was looking forward to them seeing each other again... of course it had to be a cliffy! :(
Great chapter! Definitely worth the wait. I was looking forward to them seeing each other again... of course it had to be a cliffy! :(
12/10/2009 c4 Sunfeathers
Well, I'm so glad I stumbled across this fic! I'm a big fan of Tainted Love so I know I will love this one too ... two things I LOVE already - one, Bella told him right away she was pregnant and two, she's f*cking Emmett! She's no martyred mama, denying herself a life because the guy didn't want in the picture...
And speaking of the guy - so far Edward seems like a real pr*ck! I can't wait to hear what he says ... at least he seems to remember her ...
Looking forward to more (and I hope you get 20 reviews asap)! :)
Well, I'm so glad I stumbled across this fic! I'm a big fan of Tainted Love so I know I will love this one too ... two things I LOVE already - one, Bella told him right away she was pregnant and two, she's f*cking Emmett! She's no martyred mama, denying herself a life because the guy didn't want in the picture...
And speaking of the guy - so far Edward seems like a real pr*ck! I can't wait to hear what he says ... at least he seems to remember her ...
Looking forward to more (and I hope you get 20 reviews asap)! :)
12/10/2009 c4 1MagikDragon
Fan-Freaking-Tastic!
Thats all I have to say apart from the usual begging to update ASAP!
Fan-Freaking-Tastic!
Thats all I have to say apart from the usual begging to update ASAP!
12/10/2009 c4 belladonna-eyes
I really like this story so far...thanks for the cliffie...and very interesting Jasper intro (not expecting that!) Looking forward to your next update!
I really like this story so far...thanks for the cliffie...and very interesting Jasper intro (not expecting that!) Looking forward to your next update!
12/10/2009 c4 3IssyBell91
Well F me dude.. haha..
Aw.. I know B and E are totally love.. But E and Emm are so fukhot.. *sigh..
Fab chappie, Tanya part was gross cos' she just is lol.. Love Alice she's so funny.. the twins rock, can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the brilliant work.. :D
Well F me dude.. haha..
Aw.. I know B and E are totally love.. But E and Emm are so fukhot.. *sigh..
Fab chappie, Tanya part was gross cos' she just is lol.. Love Alice she's so funny.. the twins rock, can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the brilliant work.. :D
12/10/2009 c4 sandrai86
woo.. i love the different twists to this story..totally awsome.. and the thing i love the most is that Bella isnt some pathetic victim either.. i am so looking forward to next chaper...
woo.. i love the different twists to this story..totally awsome.. and the thing i love the most is that Bella isnt some pathetic victim either.. i am so looking forward to next chaper...
12/10/2009 c4 berdb
I bet Edward will be a major DOUCHEWARD! What is hilarious is that Alice is a lesbian and will probably be crushing on Jasper.
Of course the wonderful Emmette will be instantly with Rosalie, which will result in Bella losing her Fkbuddy!
I'm glad that Bella is self-sufficient and tough in this story. It get annoying to always read about Bella needing to be "rescued" because she was left pregnant or abandoned.
I mean...common people. It is pregnancy not a plague. No one is dying or losing a limb.
I love this story so far.
I hope Bella makes him feel like the idiot that he is.
1.) He had unprotected sex with a stranger.
2.) He left no contact info or didn't get hers in case of emergencies for "like I don't know:"
* the need to alert her or -vs-to an STD or pregnancy.*
3.) He did that shit on purpose, because he knew it was impossible for her to ever reach him. So he obviously didn't care. I get he didn't want to be hounded but he could have gotten her phone number or even address to write to her in a couple of months to find out if anything happened. He didn't even need to ask her for her phone number, he couldn't gotten it while she was asleep. He knew her address cause he was *there* - he couldn't found a piece of mail with her address on it. And if he didn't have her address, how in the hell did his driver or cab pick him up. (I doubt he drove while drinking).
Anyway, I can't wait to find out his excuse. He better not say that "his people" never gave him the letter. That is not an excuse. Because he is in charge of those people.
I can't wait to read more.
Update soon.
I bet Edward will be a major DOUCHEWARD! What is hilarious is that Alice is a lesbian and will probably be crushing on Jasper.
Of course the wonderful Emmette will be instantly with Rosalie, which will result in Bella losing her Fkbuddy!
I'm glad that Bella is self-sufficient and tough in this story. It get annoying to always read about Bella needing to be "rescued" because she was left pregnant or abandoned.
I mean...common people. It is pregnancy not a plague. No one is dying or losing a limb.
I love this story so far.
I hope Bella makes him feel like the idiot that he is.
1.) He had unprotected sex with a stranger.
2.) He left no contact info or didn't get hers in case of emergencies for "like I don't know:"
* the need to alert her or -vs-to an STD or pregnancy.*
3.) He did that shit on purpose, because he knew it was impossible for her to ever reach him. So he obviously didn't care. I get he didn't want to be hounded but he could have gotten her phone number or even address to write to her in a couple of months to find out if anything happened. He didn't even need to ask her for her phone number, he couldn't gotten it while she was asleep. He knew her address cause he was *there* - he couldn't found a piece of mail with her address on it. And if he didn't have her address, how in the hell did his driver or cab pick him up. (I doubt he drove while drinking).
Anyway, I can't wait to find out his excuse. He better not say that "his people" never gave him the letter. That is not an excuse. Because he is in charge of those people.
I can't wait to read more.
Update soon.
12/10/2009 c4 berdb
I bet Edward will be a major DOUCHEWARD! What is hilarious is that Alice is a lesbian and will probably be crushing on Jasper.
Of course the wonderful Emmette will be instantly with Rosalie, which will result in Bella losing her Fkbuddy!
I'm glad that Bella is self-sufficient and tough in this story. It get annoying to always read about Bella needing to be "rescued" because she was left pregnant or abandoned.
I mean...common people. It is pregnancy not a plague. No one is dying or losing a limb.
I love this story so far.
I hope Bella makes him feel like the idiot that he is.
1.) He had unprotected sex with a stranger.
2.) He left no contact info or didn't get hers in case of emergencies for "like I don't know:"
* the need to alert her or -vs-to an STD or pregnancy.*
3.) He did that shit on purpose, because he knew it was impossible for her to ever reach him. So he obviously didn't care. I get he didn't want to be hounded but he could have gotten her phone number or even address to write to her in a couple of months to find out if anything happened. He didn't even need to ask her for her phone number, he couldn't gotten it while she was asleep. He knew her address cause he was *there* - he couldn't found a piece of mail with her address on it. And if he didn't have her address, how in the hell did his driver or cab pick him up. (I doubt he drove while drinking).
Anyway, I can't wait to find out his excuse. He better not say that "his people" never gave him the letter. That is not an excuse. Because he is in charge of those people.
I can't wait to read more.
Update soon.
I bet Edward will be a major DOUCHEWARD! What is hilarious is that Alice is a lesbian and will probably be crushing on Jasper.
Of course the wonderful Emmette will be instantly with Rosalie, which will result in Bella losing her Fkbuddy!
I'm glad that Bella is self-sufficient and tough in this story. It get annoying to always read about Bella needing to be "rescued" because she was left pregnant or abandoned.
I mean...common people. It is pregnancy not a plague. No one is dying or losing a limb.
I love this story so far.
I hope Bella makes him feel like the idiot that he is.
1.) He had unprotected sex with a stranger.
2.) He left no contact info or didn't get hers in case of emergencies for "like I don't know:"
* the need to alert her or -vs-to an STD or pregnancy.*
3.) He did that shit on purpose, because he knew it was impossible for her to ever reach him. So he obviously didn't care. I get he didn't want to be hounded but he could have gotten her phone number or even address to write to her in a couple of months to find out if anything happened. He didn't even need to ask her for her phone number, he couldn't gotten it while she was asleep. He knew her address cause he was *there* - he couldn't found a piece of mail with her address on it. And if he didn't have her address, how in the hell did his driver or cab pick him up. (I doubt he drove while drinking).
Anyway, I can't wait to find out his excuse. He better not say that "his people" never gave him the letter. That is not an excuse. Because he is in charge of those people.
I can't wait to read more.
Update soon.
12/10/2009 c4 19smmiskimen
Well here is one review on the way to 20! I am so loving this story. It is a major breath of fresh air and humor. I could picture Bella dancing around like an idiot! I was shocked when Jasper walked in and ended up being her high school sweetheart and Edward, DROOL! YUMMY! Thanks so much for the shout out and love and shameless story plug too lol. I am working on the next chapter of it later tonight, I already have like 1700 words of it written!
Well here is one review on the way to 20! I am so loving this story. It is a major breath of fresh air and humor. I could picture Bella dancing around like an idiot! I was shocked when Jasper walked in and ended up being her high school sweetheart and Edward, DROOL! YUMMY! Thanks so much for the shout out and love and shameless story plug too lol. I am working on the next chapter of it later tonight, I already have like 1700 words of it written!