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4/3/2010 c1 14midnighttornadoterror
It is really great! please contiune it i would really like it
4/3/2010 c1 6cinnamon-wolf-pup
Oh. My. God. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!
3/25/2010 c1 munchkin
Just checking in on this story (have been regularly since it was first started). This is such a great chapter, I can't help but keep an eye out and hope you continue SOON! Giant Huggs!
3/23/2010 c1 50AnimeSiren
This is a really good story. Totally didn't expect it to be McGee.
3/19/2010 c1 7Tsuki Fox
This is absolutely brilliant.

The details are fed at a great pace and paint a clear picture. The characters were well captured and over all I hope you continue this. :)
3/2/2010 c1 123Tigyr
I think that you have a great story going here and I hope you're able to continue with it. All the characters so far are true to form. Please give us more soon :)
2/26/2010 c1 9tinkrbell225
i love it looking forward for more
2/22/2010 c1 4MythplacedLogic
I am really hoping this doesn't come out sounding pushy but, please, you can't just leave it there! I dearly hope this is not some kind of cruel one-shot, because I so want to see how this works out. God, what a set up, its just like the beginning of one the episodes only triple the awesome. Cannot wait to see what happens.
2/21/2010 c1 1CBTR123
please please please please please please please please update! This story already sounds good!
2/20/2010 c1 1lttlbrat93
WOW that is such a good opening chapter got me hooked let me tell u

CANT WAIT
2/17/2010 c1 2onewhowatches
agh!

agh!

where's the rest! -flails- this was incredible. holy funking CRAP this was incredible. DX

you killed my with awesomeness.

and now i want more. :D

signed,

onewhowatches :3
1/27/2010 c1 Lily Butters
Ok. so yeah, I really like this preview you've written, and I look forward anything you do. I'm most def. keeping an eye on you.
1/14/2010 c1 Wahnsinn und Hass
Woah... I did not see that coming! *hits self* I'm really impressed with this story! It's well-written, and I especially like the fact that the characters are perfectly... well, in character! I can hardly await an update, so please do so soon!

~Wahnsinn
1/11/2010 c1 6iheartvolume
OMG! Update soon! :D
1/9/2010 c1 deadsnowwhite
WOW this was...ghuehf... I don't think I have the words for just how good this chapter was. By the time I had got to the end I was so way to go Gibbs and then that ending. It was perfect in that its a great place to stop be where the hell is the next chapter because there has to be more please let there be more and soon? this is the start to what looks to be an amazing story and one everyone should read!
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