
1/7/2010 c1
2asdfqwert
...WOW. What an incredible start. You had me on edge the whole chapter - you have a really amazing writing style. I can hardly wait for the next chapter! Best of luck writing, and I hope you've had a great start to 2010!
Cheers,
~ Estora ~

...WOW. What an incredible start. You had me on edge the whole chapter - you have a really amazing writing style. I can hardly wait for the next chapter! Best of luck writing, and I hope you've had a great start to 2010!
Cheers,
~ Estora ~
1/5/2010 c1 betty1975
Fab - really look forward to this story continuing...
Gibbs and Tony appear to be very in charcter so far
Fab - really look forward to this story continuing...
Gibbs and Tony appear to be very in charcter so far
1/4/2010 c1
15Paragon Dragon
Whoa. I'm in a loss for words here, but this chapter is a great start of this story and you've certainly got me hooked. I hope you're going to continue it. I'd love to read more.

Whoa. I'm in a loss for words here, but this chapter is a great start of this story and you've certainly got me hooked. I hope you're going to continue it. I'd love to read more.
1/3/2010 c1
139Meatball42
Wow. I was literally weak in the knees at the end of this, and I was sitting down! I don't know how you managed to make this so intense! Hell, I wanted to slug that homophobic ass! I loved the frequent looks Tony was giving Gibbs, and I cannot wait to read this story!

Wow. I was literally weak in the knees at the end of this, and I was sitting down! I don't know how you managed to make this so intense! Hell, I wanted to slug that homophobic ass! I loved the frequent looks Tony was giving Gibbs, and I cannot wait to read this story!
12/12/2009 c1
40Emeralden Rapley
aaw poor McGee. im crying. he boyfriend died and its so not cool. and that prick person. ooh just wanna pound his face in and pour hot drops of molting MAGMA on him. but the story sound great btw. hope to see more

aaw poor McGee. im crying. he boyfriend died and its so not cool. and that prick person. ooh just wanna pound his face in and pour hot drops of molting MAGMA on him. but the story sound great btw. hope to see more
12/2/2009 c1 thehunter.livejournal.com
I held off on this story for a while after reading "Have to Drive", and I'm glad that I finally decided to read it. This is wonderful! Once again the characterization is flawless and this almost seems like it could be an actual episode. Someone else mentioned being worried about it turning into "healing cocks" (which I can understand), but based on how well you've avoided that in "Have to Drive", I don't think that will be a problem with this fic. I'm looking forward to whatever comes next. :D
I held off on this story for a while after reading "Have to Drive", and I'm glad that I finally decided to read it. This is wonderful! Once again the characterization is flawless and this almost seems like it could be an actual episode. Someone else mentioned being worried about it turning into "healing cocks" (which I can understand), but based on how well you've avoided that in "Have to Drive", I don't think that will be a problem with this fic. I'm looking forward to whatever comes next. :D
11/24/2009 c1
11dreamserpent2.0
omg i can't wait for you to update. i always pictured mcgee dating guys in the service.

omg i can't wait for you to update. i always pictured mcgee dating guys in the service.
11/11/2009 c1
87Akanesi
This is brilliant. Well written, and superb characteristations. And you're damn right, no matter who you are everyone has a right to serve their country.
Please update this soon?

This is brilliant. Well written, and superb characteristations. And you're damn right, no matter who you are everyone has a right to serve their country.
Please update this soon?
11/9/2009 c1
3acj11
I love this story so far, sounds like it will end up being full of wonderful angst. I have to say that I agree with Deinde on the threesome thing, I think it would be a little more heart wrenching if McGee really loved this guy and he just died and Gibbs being the father figure. But a threesome is awesome also, so whichever you pick is totally fine with me! Please update soon, I can't wait to read more.

I love this story so far, sounds like it will end up being full of wonderful angst. I have to say that I agree with Deinde on the threesome thing, I think it would be a little more heart wrenching if McGee really loved this guy and he just died and Gibbs being the father figure. But a threesome is awesome also, so whichever you pick is totally fine with me! Please update soon, I can't wait to read more.
10/22/2009 c1
12Deinde
I love this first chapter. and I will defiantly like the fic, but I am apprehensive. I have to admit I would be alot more excited without the Gibbs/Tony or the threesome. Don't get me wrong, I love threesomes, and a threesome with these three would be awesome, but based on the first chapter here you have the chance for a really incredible and memorable fic. I feel like it would be more powerful if it was the others learning and struggling to come to terms with the situation. Learning that McGee is gay in such a way but at the same time having to put it aside to help their friend and do their job. Not to mention the interesting dynamic of having one of the team be essentially a victim. With real comfort and healing to help poor McGee with the loss of his lover (and it being a man he really loves). I just feel it would be stronger with the others being straight (Or at least not interested in McGee) than the rather old "You're gay! oh, well so am I."
I am also just kinda afraid it's going to turn into healing cocks, you know? "Ahh, no! Your lover is dead! sucks! come join us! yay, you're better and have suddenly realized your love for us!"
Anyway, it's your story and that's just my opinion. I didn't mean to offend you by this and if I did I am sorry. I don't really know much of your story except for this beautifully written first chapter. Sorry for the long rambling ramble.

I love this first chapter. and I will defiantly like the fic, but I am apprehensive. I have to admit I would be alot more excited without the Gibbs/Tony or the threesome. Don't get me wrong, I love threesomes, and a threesome with these three would be awesome, but based on the first chapter here you have the chance for a really incredible and memorable fic. I feel like it would be more powerful if it was the others learning and struggling to come to terms with the situation. Learning that McGee is gay in such a way but at the same time having to put it aside to help their friend and do their job. Not to mention the interesting dynamic of having one of the team be essentially a victim. With real comfort and healing to help poor McGee with the loss of his lover (and it being a man he really loves). I just feel it would be stronger with the others being straight (Or at least not interested in McGee) than the rather old "You're gay! oh, well so am I."
I am also just kinda afraid it's going to turn into healing cocks, you know? "Ahh, no! Your lover is dead! sucks! come join us! yay, you're better and have suddenly realized your love for us!"
Anyway, it's your story and that's just my opinion. I didn't mean to offend you by this and if I did I am sorry. I don't really know much of your story except for this beautifully written first chapter. Sorry for the long rambling ramble.
10/12/2009 c1 lunachiarolover
u SO better finish this story or give it to some one else please (preferbly u finish it), bc its an amazing idea and i bs and itotally love it! i really want to see how gibbs and tony end up with tim so PLEASE PLEASE finish it! i really wanna kn how it ends! and i totally guessed the whole mcgee being the lover by the way!
u SO better finish this story or give it to some one else please (preferbly u finish it), bc its an amazing idea and i bs and itotally love it! i really want to see how gibbs and tony end up with tim so PLEASE PLEASE finish it! i really wanna kn how it ends! and i totally guessed the whole mcgee being the lover by the way!