for The Right to Serve4/15/2016 c1 
115flootzavut
“I don't care if this Marine was sleeping with a woman, a man, a farm animal or a piece of fruit. You will show him the respect he's earned or you will get the hell out of his home.”
You made me want to high five Gibbs for this. (And knee Person in the crotch.)
115flootzavut“I don't care if this Marine was sleeping with a woman, a man, a farm animal or a piece of fruit. You will show him the respect he's earned or you will get the hell out of his home.”
You made me want to high five Gibbs for this. (And knee Person in the crotch.)
3/15/2016 c3 Stareagle
I hope you will continue this story. I like the way Gibbs is supporting Tim by being gentle, yet following the case professionally, doing the investigation. I thought his treatment of Persons was well-written.I was afraid Tim had been hurt by the cops. I really want to know what police were doing during the three hour delay.
I hope you will continue this story. I like the way Gibbs is supporting Tim by being gentle, yet following the case professionally, doing the investigation. I thought his treatment of Persons was well-written.I was afraid Tim had been hurt by the cops. I really want to know what police were doing during the three hour delay.
5/7/2015 c3 Guest
Interesting story start. I am interested in seeing where it goes and hope you plan on continuing it soon. ~Stacey DC
Interesting story start. I am interested in seeing where it goes and hope you plan on continuing it soon. ~Stacey DC
2/5/2015 c3 BabyGhost123
I really love the story u should keep on keep on going with the story in my opinion...please update soon...
I really love the story u should keep on keep on going with the story in my opinion...please update soon...
10/27/2014 c3 Guest
Have you discontinued this?
Have you discontinued this?
9/22/2014 c3 mcgeeksgirl
Please continue he this story..u r a fantastic writer and this story is awesome...can't wait to hear more about Tim and Nates relationship, who killed him and may be targeting Tim, and how the team handles everything, and what relationships develop between Tim, Gibbs and Tony...Please, please, please update this story..it is too good to be left unfinished!
Please continue he this story..u r a fantastic writer and this story is awesome...can't wait to hear more about Tim and Nates relationship, who killed him and may be targeting Tim, and how the team handles everything, and what relationships develop between Tim, Gibbs and Tony...Please, please, please update this story..it is too good to be left unfinished!
9/9/2014 c1 JerryF
Great Story Please continue it. I would love to see where you take it from here. Your a great writer. Thanks for sharing with us.
Great Story Please continue it. I would love to see where you take it from here. Your a great writer. Thanks for sharing with us.
5/25/2014 c3 Brookerz122493
I like the story so far. Would love to see more of what comes next.
I like the story so far. Would love to see more of what comes next.
1/17/2014 c1 6kingsholto
Interesting story. I'm sad to see it abandoned. I have no clue as to how it could go from that to a gibbs, dinozzo, mcgee slash
6kingsholtoInteresting story. I'm sad to see it abandoned. I have no clue as to how it could go from that to a gibbs, dinozzo, mcgee slash
9/11/2013 c3 Sprig
Gah! Poor Tim. I swear half the time I think Abby's obssessive compulsive with Tim. Like " I don't want him but neither can anybody else have him" type or that's te way I see it anyways. So can't wait to see how this pans out.
Gah! Poor Tim. I swear half the time I think Abby's obssessive compulsive with Tim. Like " I don't want him but neither can anybody else have him" type or that's te way I see it anyways. So can't wait to see how this pans out.
8/20/2013 c1 Brinohms
I know it's been a long time but I really wish you would finish this. It is compelling as I struggle with my daughter coming out.
I know it's been a long time but I really wish you would finish this. It is compelling as I struggle with my daughter coming out.