for The Right to Serve7/29/2013 c3 laura-amyyy23
I must have read this story about 50 times now, I really need to know what happens. It's been awhile since you were last active with this story, does that mean in has been abandoned or will you go back to it one day? You're a very talented writer, I'm very much enjoying the way the characters are portrayed, especially the ones of your own creating. I would love to see an insight into the relationship between Tim and Nathan. Please do continue, it would be such a waste otherwise.
Laura.
I must have read this story about 50 times now, I really need to know what happens. It's been awhile since you were last active with this story, does that mean in has been abandoned or will you go back to it one day? You're a very talented writer, I'm very much enjoying the way the characters are portrayed, especially the ones of your own creating. I would love to see an insight into the relationship between Tim and Nathan. Please do continue, it would be such a waste otherwise.
Laura.
7/7/2013 c3 Guest
You need to finish this ASAP. It is too important an issue not to be completed. And it is a good story.
You need to finish this ASAP. It is too important an issue not to be completed. And it is a good story.
7/7/2013 c3 
9arlena.ferrell
omg love this they better protect timmy take all the time you need to finish
9arlena.ferrellomg love this they better protect timmy take all the time you need to finish
4/24/2013 c3 TexasSupernaturalCowgirl
I would love to see the end of this story. You have a great mystery here.
I would love to see the end of this story. You have a great mystery here.
3/14/2013 c3 gholtlforever
Thankfully someone was looking for this story over at ncisficfind, and someone else was kind enough to offer the link, so a couple of years late, but I found this little gem.
So, we are rapidly coming up on the two year anniversary of the last update to this story, so was wondering if inspiration had recently struck? If not, I guess I'll just add this to my 'check in periodically and beg for an update' list and hope for the best.
Thanks for what is posted, it is terrific.
Thankfully someone was looking for this story over at ncisficfind, and someone else was kind enough to offer the link, so a couple of years late, but I found this little gem.
So, we are rapidly coming up on the two year anniversary of the last update to this story, so was wondering if inspiration had recently struck? If not, I guess I'll just add this to my 'check in periodically and beg for an update' list and hope for the best.
Thanks for what is posted, it is terrific.
3/6/2013 c3 Guest
Please finish this story its dam good and i love how you have written it. Thank you and please continue.
Please finish this story its dam good and i love how you have written it. Thank you and please continue.
2/1/2013 c3 Guest
You must stop whatever else you are writing and finish this story now. My son said to me almost exactly the things Tim just said to Abby. I am trying to read all of the stories like this that present this in this light and don't just focus on the sex. I love my son and am strugggling to understand. Please please finish this and if you know of any others besides the ones written by Emerald/ Emi-lyn, please put them in your favorites so I can find them. Please, please. FINISH THIS SOON.
You must stop whatever else you are writing and finish this story now. My son said to me almost exactly the things Tim just said to Abby. I am trying to read all of the stories like this that present this in this light and don't just focus on the sex. I love my son and am strugggling to understand. Please please finish this and if you know of any others besides the ones written by Emerald/ Emi-lyn, please put them in your favorites so I can find them. Please, please. FINISH THIS SOON.
8/31/2012 c3 Kadama Chrone
Just found this story today and I can truly say that I can't wait for an update this is great! Can't wait to see how Tony, and Gibbs figure out that they are in love with Tim. Also can't wait to see how Tim will go for the both of them :D
Just found this story today and I can truly say that I can't wait for an update this is great! Can't wait to see how Tony, and Gibbs figure out that they are in love with Tim. Also can't wait to see how Tim will go for the both of them :D
7/4/2012 c1 Guest
More story please.
More story please.
6/4/2012 c3 11mandielouluvsewe
I see that's it's been a while since you updated this story, but I think you should finish it. It's good. I want to see what happens. Please. I'm begging you to finish. LOL
11mandielouluvseweI see that's it's been a while since you updated this story, but I think you should finish it. It's good. I want to see what happens. Please. I'm begging you to finish. LOL
5/25/2012 c1 Guest
We can has more story now please?
Dont make me do the kicked puppy look.
We can has more story now please?
Dont make me do the kicked puppy look.
5/15/2012 c3 Alwaysand
This site always gives me trouble logging in, sorry. I really enjoyed what you have posted and hope you come back to it someday.
This site always gives me trouble logging in, sorry. I really enjoyed what you have posted and hope you come back to it someday.