for The Right to Serve3/29/2012 c2 
5NotIn2012Anymore
Wow, I'm really intrigued. I like where this is going and I can't believe people's reactions just because the Marine was gay? I know quite a few gay people and their is nothing wrong with it, and I like this fic in general!
5NotIn2012AnymoreWow, I'm really intrigued. I like where this is going and I can't believe people's reactions just because the Marine was gay? I know quite a few gay people and their is nothing wrong with it, and I like this fic in general!
3/24/2012 c3 astragail
I'm looking forward to see how you do this one. I liked your other ncis tic so want to see how you finish it. Good luck.
I'm looking forward to see how you do this one. I liked your other ncis tic so want to see how you finish it. Good luck.
3/20/2012 c3 noonanna
i know how hard it could be when you wait too long for an update,but this is story worth waiting for.update soon please.
i know how hard it could be when you wait too long for an update,but this is story worth waiting for.update soon please.
2/20/2012 c3 FrancineMarie
Geeze, you can write. I'm very interested to see where this is going. Silly Tony and his over thinking. Clearly his Probie needs him.
-Francine
Geeze, you can write. I'm very interested to see where this is going. Silly Tony and his over thinking. Clearly his Probie needs him.
-Francine
2/15/2012 c1 noonanna
love your first ncis fic,and i know this one is going to be great if you finish.
love your first ncis fic,and i know this one is going to be great if you finish.
1/26/2012 c3 Cheryl Collins
I found this by accident and I really hope yu are able to finish it. Your writing is mature and thoughtful and I'm interested to see where you take it- I certainly think you will avoid the healing cocks cliche from what I've read so far.
I found this by accident and I really hope yu are able to finish it. Your writing is mature and thoughtful and I'm interested to see where you take it- I certainly think you will avoid the healing cocks cliche from what I've read so far.
1/3/2012 c3 13daydream53
This was briliant! I am so excited for the next chapter! I will be waited with baited breath (is that the right expression?). anyway update soon please! I can't wait for more!
13daydream53This was briliant! I am so excited for the next chapter! I will be waited with baited breath (is that the right expression?). anyway update soon please! I can't wait for more!
12/18/2011 c3 13emeraldcryst
Hello!
I'm not in habit of reading unfinished stories because I hate waiting for the next update but the abstract just made me want to read, completed story be damned.
I have to say in answer to your comment at the beginnig of the last chapter that this story definetely has to be slash. I can see a lot of ways for a relationship to evolve and it would be a shame not to do it (I'm a slash writer and reader myself so maybe I'm a tad partial...).
I hope you will be posting the next chapter soon!
13emeraldcrystHello!
I'm not in habit of reading unfinished stories because I hate waiting for the next update but the abstract just made me want to read, completed story be damned.
I have to say in answer to your comment at the beginnig of the last chapter that this story definetely has to be slash. I can see a lot of ways for a relationship to evolve and it would be a shame not to do it (I'm a slash writer and reader myself so maybe I'm a tad partial...).
I hope you will be posting the next chapter soon!
11/5/2011 c3 11BlueSkyeCloud9
Me likes! I hope you return and update soon, the story has such a wonderful pretense and it would be a shame to leave it here. And, you're a fantastic writer:) Updates soon please?
11BlueSkyeCloud9Me likes! I hope you return and update soon, the story has such a wonderful pretense and it would be a shame to leave it here. And, you're a fantastic writer:) Updates soon please?
10/28/2011 c3 1ApolloPheonixTear
For the record, I don't care whether you do slash or straight or what have you. I just want more! I love your stories, and I'm looking forward to another chapter of this one.
1ApolloPheonixTearFor the record, I don't care whether you do slash or straight or what have you. I just want more! I love your stories, and I'm looking forward to another chapter of this one.
10/3/2011 c3 3stareagle
I really hope you feel inspired to finish this story. Not only is the case itself interesting but the dynamics of friendship are amazingly complex. I loved Tim's response to Abby. Though I don't personally see Abby as selfish as I perceived in this, I could understand her fear of betrayal. I was surprised she could not see Tim's point of view as quickly.
Tony's response is similar to Abby's - self-oriented. Your Gibbs is brilliant and well done.
This is a powerful story. I am eager to see you finish it because the reality of life under DADT was hell. So many people don't understand that. Even now with the repeal of DADT, the prejudice is still there.
Thank you for a thought-provoking and entertaining story.
3stareagleI really hope you feel inspired to finish this story. Not only is the case itself interesting but the dynamics of friendship are amazingly complex. I loved Tim's response to Abby. Though I don't personally see Abby as selfish as I perceived in this, I could understand her fear of betrayal. I was surprised she could not see Tim's point of view as quickly.
Tony's response is similar to Abby's - self-oriented. Your Gibbs is brilliant and well done.
This is a powerful story. I am eager to see you finish it because the reality of life under DADT was hell. So many people don't understand that. Even now with the repeal of DADT, the prejudice is still there.
Thank you for a thought-provoking and entertaining story.
10/2/2011 c3 9BellaHickenbottom
I LOOOOOVE this story! I will gladly accept a update whenever you are willing to bless us with one! I absolutely LOVED McGee's explanation as to why he was with Abby, it definitely was a great addition to the story. Now that Tony finally got his head outta his ass hopefully Tim will relax a little more and they can figure out what happened! I'm very interested and intrigued to find out more! Please update soon!
9BellaHickenbottomI LOOOOOVE this story! I will gladly accept a update whenever you are willing to bless us with one! I absolutely LOVED McGee's explanation as to why he was with Abby, it definitely was a great addition to the story. Now that Tony finally got his head outta his ass hopefully Tim will relax a little more and they can figure out what happened! I'm very interested and intrigued to find out more! Please update soon!
9/4/2011 c3 Myrlyn
I found you by way of the LJ comm, NCIS FicFind, for your Tim/Tony story "Have to Drive." I have to agree with the person who requested that story, it was the BEST Tim/Tony I've read! When I finished that one, I found this. And it starting out to be a GREAT story. Poor McGee. And I love that you write Tony so conflicted. I can't wait for the boys to get a clue about Gibbs.
You are a truly gifted writer. I could actually envision the apartment, the interrogation room, observation, everything. You also keep the characters *in* character, which is something fanfic writers seldom do. This is one fandom that has more authors doing that than any I know of.
FANTASTIC fic!
I found you by way of the LJ comm, NCIS FicFind, for your Tim/Tony story "Have to Drive." I have to agree with the person who requested that story, it was the BEST Tim/Tony I've read! When I finished that one, I found this. And it starting out to be a GREAT story. Poor McGee. And I love that you write Tony so conflicted. I can't wait for the boys to get a clue about Gibbs.
You are a truly gifted writer. I could actually envision the apartment, the interrogation room, observation, everything. You also keep the characters *in* character, which is something fanfic writers seldom do. This is one fandom that has more authors doing that than any I know of.
FANTASTIC fic!