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14Power of Magic
Glad that Naruto's clones were able to stop the Zetsu's from causing chaos and mayhem on the battlefields and that he and his team were easily able to dispose of the opponents that they fought against. Here's hoping that Orochimaru doesn't bring back any Uzumaki's, as I'm sure that Naruto would have a really tough time fighting against them
14Power of MagicGlad that Naruto's clones were able to stop the Zetsu's from causing chaos and mayhem on the battlefields and that he and his team were easily able to dispose of the opponents that they fought against. Here's hoping that Orochimaru doesn't bring back any Uzumaki's, as I'm sure that Naruto would have a really tough time fighting against them
2/9 c3 Pat9921
oh my goddddddd! ehy does everyone has to have a fucking council in konoha!
that is not a thing and never will be a thing.
it is a ninja village and the hokage is the ruler here not an appointed person, he was chosen by the previous hokage and tsunade was decided by the help of the village elders that were the teamamtes of hiruzen and jiraiya gave the suggestion in the first place.
the daimyo has to also approve i guess but good god dude there is no civillian council,no clan head council that is not a thing,will never be a thing.
the clan heads are for only their clans not for konoha,the decisions are done by the hokage himself.
it is not a coalition of clans it is just a gathering of clans. in the military that is konaha shinobi there is no divisions based on clans there are just shinobi in teams that contains anyone that works good together.
fuck dude why? why?
the civillians are there because the shinobi protect them and shinobi protect them cause they handle all other businesses so shinobi don't have to but some shibobi still do as we see the yamanaka have a shop.
oh my goddddddd! ehy does everyone has to have a fucking council in konoha!
that is not a thing and never will be a thing.
it is a ninja village and the hokage is the ruler here not an appointed person, he was chosen by the previous hokage and tsunade was decided by the help of the village elders that were the teamamtes of hiruzen and jiraiya gave the suggestion in the first place.
the daimyo has to also approve i guess but good god dude there is no civillian council,no clan head council that is not a thing,will never be a thing.
the clan heads are for only their clans not for konoha,the decisions are done by the hokage himself.
it is not a coalition of clans it is just a gathering of clans. in the military that is konaha shinobi there is no divisions based on clans there are just shinobi in teams that contains anyone that works good together.
fuck dude why? why?
the civillians are there because the shinobi protect them and shinobi protect them cause they handle all other businesses so shinobi don't have to but some shibobi still do as we see the yamanaka have a shop.
2/8 c4 Pat9921
also shouldn't there be nature manipulation to do here first.
Sasuke didn't do it because well kishimoto hadn't thoight of that before and well sasuke is kishimoto's star child or whatnot. he just did it out of sheer drive to get praise from his father.
also shouldn't there be nature manipulation to do here first.
Sasuke didn't do it because well kishimoto hadn't thoight of that before and well sasuke is kishimoto's star child or whatnot. he just did it out of sheer drive to get praise from his father.
2/8 c4 Pat9921
well that kinda sucks as he has the fire afinity now.
maybe should have let wind be his primary and fire a secondary.
cause then what is this naruto that is not naruto at all.
come on dude!
if he gets the cursed mark and goes to orochimaru that would be the most shittiest and lazy writing i would ever seen here,u know what there might be more shitty and lazy writing on this site here.
well that kinda sucks as he has the fire afinity now.
maybe should have let wind be his primary and fire a secondary.
cause then what is this naruto that is not naruto at all.
come on dude!
if he gets the cursed mark and goes to orochimaru that would be the most shittiest and lazy writing i would ever seen here,u know what there might be more shitty and lazy writing on this site here.
2/8 c3 Pat9921
i hope naruto's unpredictability remains in his taijutsu. it's his battle instinct trait after all. i hope it doesn't get lost and he just becomes like sasuke.
would not like that all. so lets hope you do it justice
i hope naruto's unpredictability remains in his taijutsu. it's his battle instinct trait after all. i hope it doesn't get lost and he just becomes like sasuke.
would not like that all. so lets hope you do it justice
11/19/2024 c6 Animeworld2.0
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Hello, I hope you're doing well!
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With your permission, I would be honored to create a video of your story. I will give full credit to you as the original author in the video description and provide a link back to your original work. Additionally, I will share the video link in the comments of your story so you can see it for yourself.
I genuinely believe your story deserves to reach an even wider audience. Our channel is supported by the community, allowing us to continue spreading great stories like yours to new fans. If you have any suggestions, such as a preferred "What If" title or any other changes you'd like, I'd be more than happy to accommodate them.
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11/5/2024 c42 thaihnguyen1993
I have a feeling that even if Naruto helps the Alliance wins the war, a majority of Konoha will still hate him for no reason.
I have a feeling that even if Naruto helps the Alliance wins the war, a majority of Konoha will still hate him for no reason.
11/5/2024 c42 theronjohn325
I sense some truly epic fights coming up, and knowing you... Yeah, this is gonna be good.
See you in the next update!
I sense some truly epic fights coming up, and knowing you... Yeah, this is gonna be good.
See you in the next update!
11/4/2024 c42 Power of Magic
And so Naruto has entered the war at last and I wonder what his Susanoo and Tailed Beast Charka Cloak will look like, when he combines them together. Here's hoping that this team Naruto is leading will be able to defeat many Zetsu's and Edo Tensei (and I wonder if Naruto will face off against any that he fought against before, or that he read about)
And so Naruto has entered the war at last and I wonder what his Susanoo and Tailed Beast Charka Cloak will look like, when he combines them together. Here's hoping that this team Naruto is leading will be able to defeat many Zetsu's and Edo Tensei (and I wonder if Naruto will face off against any that he fought against before, or that he read about)
11/4/2024 c42 jonatanramirez164
Nice chapter but why do you take 5 months to post a chapter. Chapter 42 was posted on Patreon on October 7, why didn’t you post it on Fanfic too?
Nice chapter but why do you take 5 months to post a chapter. Chapter 42 was posted on Patreon on October 7, why didn’t you post it on Fanfic too?
10/1/2024 c11 1bleachorange
Ino didnt meet the kyuubi while in naruto's head? Either the author forgot, or she got lucky.
1bleachorangeIno didnt meet the kyuubi while in naruto's head? Either the author forgot, or she got lucky.
9/30/2024 c10 bleachorange
If I had to offer one major critique - show, dont tell. Rather than saying Ino did X, Y, Z - try actually having her do those things in your words. If she is hanging out with naruto and choji and planning to beat up asuma, let her have the space to have that conversation and interaction rather than telling us about it. This applies to many things in the fiction thus far.
Not every interaction needs to show and not tell, if you are summarizing events to rapidly pass time, but if you do it more than a very small part of the time, expect to lose a lot of potential oomph from your character events.
If I had to offer one major critique - show, dont tell. Rather than saying Ino did X, Y, Z - try actually having her do those things in your words. If she is hanging out with naruto and choji and planning to beat up asuma, let her have the space to have that conversation and interaction rather than telling us about it. This applies to many things in the fiction thus far.
Not every interaction needs to show and not tell, if you are summarizing events to rapidly pass time, but if you do it more than a very small part of the time, expect to lose a lot of potential oomph from your character events.
9/30/2024 c6 bleachorange
Does the hokage have so little power? He seems like a very weak ruler in this fic, constantly explaining his actions and appeasing others. Not even knowing where Root is located is an automatic failure as a leader. No leader who ever succeeds can allow an uncontrolled military force in their nation. In canon, it is explained as hiruzen thinking he has control and he has been deceived. He trusted danzo, and danzo was in his blind spot. In this fic, it is not the case and I wonder how this nation ever functioned.
Does the hokage have so little power? He seems like a very weak ruler in this fic, constantly explaining his actions and appeasing others. Not even knowing where Root is located is an automatic failure as a leader. No leader who ever succeeds can allow an uncontrolled military force in their nation. In canon, it is explained as hiruzen thinking he has control and he has been deceived. He trusted danzo, and danzo was in his blind spot. In this fic, it is not the case and I wonder how this nation ever functioned.
9/18/2024 c30 6SonarTex43
Couldn’t Naruto use the tigers as trackers? In our world, tigers have excellent hunting skills, and powerful senses.
6SonarTex43Couldn’t Naruto use the tigers as trackers? In our world, tigers have excellent hunting skills, and powerful senses.