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3/15/2019 c1 mobulis
Vampires are immune to telepathy.
6/21/2018 c3 James Birdsong
Good three chapters
10/24/2015 c3 45VizeerLord
Beautiful idea...
The whole thing was not even a full chapter little lone a full story.

In chapter one, Becoming Bester; we need to know his thoughts on being ripped from his time, he is more then just a Psi-cop, but a Protecter of Earth Force Law. Did Xander pick up a PPC, or did he have one at home...

Chapter two, Morning After; Xander would have needed to spend time building his wall, hearing his Parents thoughts, Harmony's (is she really that simple and shallow, or is it an act?) Snyder's and his nasty, petty, and fearful bullying ideas.

Chapter three, loved how you decribed Willow and Buffy, humming bird and big cat, but no Cordy?

More please
11/1/2014 c3 Netchka
Cool start to the story. Can't wait to read more.
12/13/2013 c3 4jabbarulez
Xanders sharing his head with Besker? ROFL!
12/3/2013 c3 7Herdcat
oooh more story! I was so glad when I went to reread and noticed this :) oooh I love Zander/ Bester this is SUCH a cool idea and you write it really well - the part about Buffy thinking in French is very clever - as is the idea that Zander wouldn't understand but Bester would - I would love to see where this goes - if you felt like updating it further!
7/22/2013 c3 6Rosa Mundi
This is fun. Dunno how I missed it before.
5/17/2013 c3 renatria
Excellent Bester voice. I hope you are going to use material from the B5 Psi-Corps novels. They really added depth to Mr. Bester, and I found him much more sympathetic than I expected. I'm glad to see you've updated recently, and hope to see more.
5/14/2013 c3 12creativesm75
oh boy. and more complications.
5/12/2013 c3 13CynthiaW
I'm glad to see this story got updated. I can't wait to see where you take it. This was a cool twist to the episode from the series.

I find it interesting that Buffy's mind is thinking in the language that would have been spoken by the princess she was dressed as, even though Buffy never learned it. And Willow is trying to straighten out the logic of what happened when she was a ghost. Cordelia is her typical self, of course, as she wasn't transformed into her costume. Giles's mind is full of thoughts typical of a scholar, and Xander seems to think he's on the right track of what happened to him.

Excellent job on this. Hope you update again soon.
5/6/2013 c3 1Bobboky
very good
5/6/2013 c3 gaul1
Good short chapter...
5/6/2013 c3 Meh
Woo, more of this, great! Bester really is one of the coolest, creepiest villains out there. When you want to reach through the screen to throttle or beat a character for the things he's done, thats when you know the writers have done their job correctly.
5/6/2013 c1 39lord Martiya
Freakin' Bester in the Buffyverse... Isn't it overkill?
5/5/2013 c3 1Carma Nightmare
cool
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