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12/28/2010 c2 tigerlily
Hi! So, so far this is pretty good.

A couple of more chapters would be nice{hint, hint;-)}

I really dont have much to add to this. Oh yeah quick question.

In Harry's fifth year Dumbledore hired Umbitch {sorry typo ;-)}because the ministry was forcing him to. Or thats what i think it was. I used to be a big Dumbledore supporter, but I thought about it, and you're right.
5/7/2010 c2 Miss Millie
Hello again,

I am such a H&G fan I hope you write more.
Is Harry going to let Ginny know and the others to start getting in shape too.

I know some people put R & Hr down but I think they all can work together.
My husban and daughter kee telling me they are not real!

But we know different. Plese write more.
Thanks for the email
Good luck in all you do.
5/7/2010 c1 Miss Millie
Hello,

This is a good start I can't wait to read more.

Seeya
1/8/2010 c2 71Lyric Medlie
very good, i'm looking forward to chapter 3! Chop Chop!

-thanks, Lyric ♥♪♫
1/8/2010 c1 Lyric Medlie
oh... so sweet, and good! This is definitely going to be a good story!

-thanks, Lyric ♥♪♫
9/18/2009 c2 UnderstatedGenius
good good! lols keep writing!

Gina xx
9/17/2009 c2 24DukeBrymin
Ah, so you're turning it into a Manipulative!Dumbledore story. Better and better.
9/17/2009 c1 DukeBrymin
Nice start, albeit rather typical for post-OotP stories. Hopefully you can take this in new directions (fluffy ones, possibly).

Thanks!
9/16/2009 c2 hptump
Wow that is short.
9/16/2009 c2 7Phantom1s
Rather interesting start so far. Keep up the good work.
9/14/2009 c1 UnderstatedGenius
well done Mina! you did really well, it's in bite size chunks and easy to read, good going, keep it up! lols

Gina x
9/12/2009 c1 2LilyLuna21
GOOD START... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
9/12/2009 c1 7jaythekoala
This sort of story's been done before many times, so you'll have to write it pretty well, and also make it fairly unique. That said, good start and hope you write more.
9/11/2009 c1 Melora
For further writing, you may be interested in this site:

http:/ w w w . geocities . com /sapienti_university_of_magic (without the spaces)

It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.

Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Melora Brockert, SUM student
9/11/2009 c1 26Ashley Elizabeth Malfoy
awe cute
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