for v1 Close your eyes, Open your Heart8/18/2011 c9 SilentDreamer01
SoraxReina(Me/You)! I think it will be alright because Roxas is a part of Sora right? 3 ^^
SoraxReina(Me/You)! I think it will be alright because Roxas is a part of Sora right? 3 ^^
9/20/2010 c1 
9Not Your Original Girl
Omg i love this story and the rewrite! At first i started reading this cause my first name is reina and i thought that was pretty amazing but i ended up falling in love with this stroy i even recomanded these stroys as something to read on my page! ^.^ please keep up the good work
9Not Your Original GirlOmg i love this story and the rewrite! At first i started reading this cause my first name is reina and i thought that was pretty amazing but i ended up falling in love with this stroy i even recomanded these stroys as something to read on my page! ^.^ please keep up the good work
9/14/2010 c15 Not Your Original Girl
omg i loved this i think sora and reina should be together! they seem like a better couple well.. to me they do
omg i loved this i think sora and reina should be together! they seem like a better couple well.. to me they do
8/13/2010 c21 4Yuuko Aosagibi
Hmmm... Well I really don't see much error except some of Roxas' OOCness. Other than that, I don't see where you can improve in.
4Yuuko AosagibiHmmm... Well I really don't see much error except some of Roxas' OOCness. Other than that, I don't see where you can improve in.
8/7/2010 c20 4Battle-Royalist
I just hope Roxas gets her back soon. I love that pairing better!I can't wait for the next chapters!
4Battle-RoyalistI just hope Roxas gets her back soon. I love that pairing better!I can't wait for the next chapters!
8/7/2010 c20 16Akizakura202
Dude... spelling errors galore! XD You called Scar Mufasa a couple times, specifically when Scar was ushering Simba to the back of the cliff. You should be a little more careful when reading these over... You also included twice a portion where Timon and Pumbaa stopped eating their "meal" and mentioned that they should speak to Simba.
This is me being anal and musing, but why would a pig in the wild reference sleeves XD? Now that I think of it this happens all the time, I guess, with even professional works, but...
Namine's character seems quite off, I never would've pictured her so... Well, if she were scheming, I'd picture her a little less, well, sinister. Maybe saddened, but she has a good heart-as Kairi's Nobody...
Yeah, Pride Rock was definitely rushed XP There could've been some details added to intensify it that wouldn't've made it too, too long. Your word count is only at like five thousand-I think you've hit seven thousand, before, so it would've been okay.
So, I may be way off, but this is the first thing that popped into my head: Reina was originally on Destiny Islands. The Nobodies all have somebodies that were on the Islands, explaining their connection with her, but I'm not sure. It simply explains in my head Sora and the paopu-technically, anyone else on other worlds wouldn't know about the legend 'cause paopu fruit are only native to Destiny Islands.
Looking forward to more ^^ I'd revise this chapter a little, though, if only to correct errors.
16Akizakura202Dude... spelling errors galore! XD You called Scar Mufasa a couple times, specifically when Scar was ushering Simba to the back of the cliff. You should be a little more careful when reading these over... You also included twice a portion where Timon and Pumbaa stopped eating their "meal" and mentioned that they should speak to Simba.
This is me being anal and musing, but why would a pig in the wild reference sleeves XD? Now that I think of it this happens all the time, I guess, with even professional works, but...
Namine's character seems quite off, I never would've pictured her so... Well, if she were scheming, I'd picture her a little less, well, sinister. Maybe saddened, but she has a good heart-as Kairi's Nobody...
Yeah, Pride Rock was definitely rushed XP There could've been some details added to intensify it that wouldn't've made it too, too long. Your word count is only at like five thousand-I think you've hit seven thousand, before, so it would've been okay.
So, I may be way off, but this is the first thing that popped into my head: Reina was originally on Destiny Islands. The Nobodies all have somebodies that were on the Islands, explaining their connection with her, but I'm not sure. It simply explains in my head Sora and the paopu-technically, anyone else on other worlds wouldn't know about the legend 'cause paopu fruit are only native to Destiny Islands.
Looking forward to more ^^ I'd revise this chapter a little, though, if only to correct errors.
6/2/2010 c19 4Yuuko Aosagibi
FINALLY! THEY KISS! ;-; I'm soo happy. but I wonder...I think it'll be a bit awkward between Sora and Reina for a while, Roxas will get jealous, and then BAM something plot twisting will happen. Update soon!
4Yuuko AosagibiFINALLY! THEY KISS! ;-; I'm soo happy. but I wonder...I think it'll be a bit awkward between Sora and Reina for a while, Roxas will get jealous, and then BAM something plot twisting will happen. Update soon!
6/1/2010 c19 Akizakura202
(Sorry, couldn't log in for this one.) Well, I'm a little disappointed. When I'd thrown around the idea of Timon and Pumbaa, I'd thought you'd be breaking away from the KHII Pride Lands plot a bit XP In the end you did, a rather juicy portion, but I was bored through most of it . . . especially since I'd happened to play through Pride Lands before I noticed you updated XD But buahahahahahahahaha! As soon as Sora said something about trying the worm together, I knew there was gonna be a Lady and the Tramp moment! I had the gut feeling! And I can't wait to see what happens :D But then, I wonder if much will 'cause they're lions and it seems kinda weird; cats show affection more with bumps and rubbing their cheeks (they have sweat glands there, so it's sort of a weird marking kind of thing.) But then again they're actually humans XD I just don't know whether or not Reina will actually feel something 'cause she's kissing a cat. . . . Can't really get caught up in throes of passion. But, 'tis fo you to decide (if you do decide, maybe you ca pull it off,I dunno *shrugs*) Can't wait to find out! :)
-Aki
(Sorry, couldn't log in for this one.) Well, I'm a little disappointed. When I'd thrown around the idea of Timon and Pumbaa, I'd thought you'd be breaking away from the KHII Pride Lands plot a bit XP In the end you did, a rather juicy portion, but I was bored through most of it . . . especially since I'd happened to play through Pride Lands before I noticed you updated XD But buahahahahahahahaha! As soon as Sora said something about trying the worm together, I knew there was gonna be a Lady and the Tramp moment! I had the gut feeling! And I can't wait to see what happens :D But then, I wonder if much will 'cause they're lions and it seems kinda weird; cats show affection more with bumps and rubbing their cheeks (they have sweat glands there, so it's sort of a weird marking kind of thing.) But then again they're actually humans XD I just don't know whether or not Reina will actually feel something 'cause she's kissing a cat. . . . Can't really get caught up in throes of passion. But, 'tis fo you to decide (if you do decide, maybe you ca pull it off,I dunno *shrugs*) Can't wait to find out! :)
-Aki