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3/14/2010 c15 4Yuuko Aosagibi
=D Sora has his dark form now! O.o I didn't know reina could do that... Please update soon!
3/14/2010 c15 25TheMadnessWithin13
love it can't wait for the next chapters and can't wait for more sora and reina.
3/13/2010 c15 24SpringBorn
Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one. What is going to happen to Sora?
3/13/2010 c15 16Akizakura202
XD You're killin' me, Smalls, gettin' these updates out so much quicker than me! (But don't take that to mean slow down XD I'm just jealous.) Hehe, I should be working on a History project that's going to like make or break my grade, but I decided to read the update instead XD

It wasn't a bad chapter (I love Pirates of the Carribbean :P Though I think I just spelled it incorrectly) and yeah, a little cliche, but forgivable-maybe in the future some twist can be added to make it a little less so. It did get a smidgen boring (I find myself skimming through the parts that are totally in the game already) but still forgivable.

ANTIFORM MADE AN APPEARANCE! Now, what reprocussions will occurr, I wonder? I'm curious to know. After all, lest I missed where it stated Donald and Goofy aren't present, they were and witnessed it, ne? I think she will have feelings for Sora-especially because of all the Roxas drama and when she discovers whatever it is he's trying to do, I imagine she will be a little unforgiving-at least at first. She may not be the type to hold a grudge. Between Sora and Roxas, though, Sora is the one with less drama and is the more optimistic side. It would be like LightXLight. Unless you want to do the whole opposites attract thing with LightXDark, in which case that would be RokuRei. . . . Though in truth, that's a pretty unhealthy relationship XP-Ahh! I'm like writing everything as I'm thinking it! Not good! Must-do-project XD!

Um, I don't know why the pirate wasn't cursed when he touched her, I assume it has something to do with her heart of light that probably cleanses curses when in contact, but only when that contact is sustained.

Okey, that's all I've got time to say XD Hasta la bye-bye! Can't wait for the next one (and I'm hoping my next one will be up before that, or else that's just pitiful on my part XP) Hehe.
3/13/2010 c15 3XRarityoftearsX
SORAXREINA!
3/1/2010 c14 4Yuuko Aosagibi
I really love this chapter! Bleh... Roxas is just... cruel now. I'm rooting for SoraxReina now! Update soon!
2/27/2010 c14 24SpringBorn
Roxas sure is pissed. I hope he doesn't do something drastic but then again I think I do. Loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next.
2/27/2010 c14 25TheMadnessWithin13
i love it i hope to see more soon. i love how its turning in sora and reina
2/26/2010 c1 4HeirxxOfxxMerlin
pure genius in my opinion

=D
2/26/2010 c14 16Akizakura202
The chapter's like, almost two thousand words shorter than normal XD Wow. A good chapter, nevertheless. The devil's in the details, though, 'cause there were little things that probably could've been done-and because I'm not a hundred percent sure what those things are I'm not gonna penalize you for it XD-to make some of the characters feel more in-character, mostly the Disney ones. I like how you included some of the canon Disney we didn't get to hear too much from in the game.

Roxas definitely isn't himself XP This should prove interesting-and Axel not liking it, no less. Fun fun fun fun, Organization and relationship drama. In fact there you probably could've embellished a little more on Axel's feelings about Roxas changing, or on the changes themselves.

Okey doke. I think that's all I've got to say XD Can't wait for the next one; my position is still SoraXReina :D Hasta la bye-bye!

-Aki
2/26/2010 c14 3XRarityoftearsX
EVIL ROXAS!
2/20/2010 c13 25TheMadnessWithin13
this is so good please keep going i know it will get better. I love the sora and reina I hope it gets better with those too.
2/15/2010 c13 16Akizakura202
Hola! Since I missed opportunity to review chapter twelve, I think it'd be better simply to review both chapters in this one :D

Chapter twelve felt like you were dropping hints like crazy, or rather leading us on XD Predecessor? Father? "Him"? Please tell me some of this is going to be cleared up sometime soon. I gather the Nobodies knew Reina in the past and something happened to her that "deleted" these memories and now they're trying to piece those together? And I'm going to assume the predecessor is an OC, right? So even knowing that wouldn't say for sure, would it . . . ?

Chapter thirteen, in truth, was kinda boring. I found myself skimming through a lot of it XP Well, aside from the Sora and Reina parts as well as the Nobodies; I believe I've expressed my opinion of the love triangle? Even so, I'll say it again: SoraXReina, ftw! (XD Normally I don't use text talk, but I had to throw that in.

Welp, I've gotta go work on my own story now, so until next time! Ja ne!
2/14/2010 c13 11justpink
Nice chappie!

Update soon!
2/11/2010 c13 4Yuuko Aosagibi
You know, as the story progresses, I'm starting to like Roxas less and less. He can be such a jerk! Update soon!
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